All Comments on 'Fucking My Brother-In-Law'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

if my wife did that i would behead the whore

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
i want to fuck someone

I want to fuck someone

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Needs work

I have to agree with the other comments. Stop using '&'. Some sentences run on and on and on and on and on. Overall okay but will be so much better with some cleanup.

Keep them coming.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Get an editor

You have potential. Way too many grammatical errors. Literotica has voluntary editors. You need to get one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Lazy writing

Is it so difficult to type "and" instead of "&"?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Opportunity meets Desire

Good Wank Material, healthy fun between Consenting Adults. Sense of Urgency to Couple, stimulating material.

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