All Comments on 'Fucking My Sex Starved Mother'

Good story lad!! Can you make a story starring a white man and an Indian lady? Or an Indian man and white lady? Maybe even gangbangs?

Can you write a story from the female POV?

Write a story from mom's pov

Good first story. There is so much more I would like to know about the couple and the expanding family.

Your English is very good, and this one is well written.

Give us more.

Not bad for a first story. Very well written. I feel they rushed into the sex too quickly though.

I know this was just your first story but this was no good. The story just rushed right into them having sex, there was no emotion behind it besides lust, and there was no real story behind any of it.

Better luck next time.

Liked your story cant wait to read more.

Likely the best written of the essays I have read submitted by authors from India. There are a few small items, one if which I explain below.

"The most beautiful pairs of boobs" boobs is plural so the woRd should be pair. We're there two, or more women exposing their breasts, it would br pairs of boobs.

Perhaps your sequel will include more physical attributes of these lovers, and their interactions with one another.

draw it out some more next time.

Great first story. Keep writing!

I love fucking Indian women.

Nice first story

Baap story hai bidu. Write more. Fuck the sister. Fuck the grandmother. Fuck the aunty. Fuck the neighbour.

Nice one mate! Can you write a story starring an Indian woman and a white male? I always had a fantasy to fuck and breed an Indian woman but couldn't do so because I am out here in the Mid-west where there aren't many Indians.

Filled her up with the curry, eh? Nice one.

God story. Loved that the son bred his mother.

Nice story but it was a bit to short for me gave it a 3.

Wished it was longer!

Liked the story but just as it was getting good you went to them having a child and then stopped??? 4stars

Yet another story that the son gets insulted in by having a kid with his mom and not allowed to claim it and another story about him being a coward and not manning up instead he just accepts after not being asked but being told so like those others like this it sucked

Should have been a longer story. AAAA+++

Just another jab at the son story the mother fucks her so gets pregnant by him then tells him he doesn't mount to shit and can't claim his kid to get over it and he just goes along with like some pussy if the son was a man he would have said to hell with that and claim his kid and wouldn't have cared who knew he would have told his dad take a hike this is my daughter not yours