All Comments on 'Fucking My Sister after 40 Years'

Just one copy at a time. Good story and I could feel her sadness about her husband and her joy when she finally lost herself into great sex with her brother.

Being a Charlestonian myself it makes this story even HOTTER. Great read, kept me hard the entire story. Thanks

Very good, very enjoyable.

You can edit the story and remove the duplicated section then resubmit it - there's a how to in the FAQs section.

Still, a great read.

It was pretty good. But why submit it twice when it's only a three chapter story making it six chapters?

Brilliant story. Worth many a sequel. Please get a proof reader, as there are too many typos. Also, no need to duplicate. Look forward to the next chapter.

some of the best dialogue i've seen in a story and very descriptive!

Good story. I love reading about fucking a sister. I did.

great story more please

Why is it all repeated?

Copied in twice

Good story has a lot of super possibilities for future chapters. Let us see how their love for each other develops.

BTW- check the editing page 4,5,6 are the same as 1.2.3.

I absolutely love it!!! I never had any sisters but had several cousins that I always wanted to have sex with, one that I still would to this day if she would and I am 63 years old. I really appreciate you sharing this...

Great story, but needs proof reading. Also you posted it twice, but that doesnt detract from a great story. Please post chapter 2

You definitely need to edit your story. It repeated itself instead of providing a reasonable ending. Sloppy editing throughout, but this duplication of the story kinda ruined everything!

Loved the story but am a bit curious as to the reason for submitting it twice in the same posting?

It was great until I saw where you copied everything in again. This is what a proofreader would find. Please get one and I'll read it again. 2*

The story was very readable. The one major problem, you somehow managed to 'paste' the same story twice. Kind of screwed with the expectancy of more going to happen. Keep going. Bud

I have had one of my sisters and mom, Working on another sister,

Edit the other chapters and keep it going, Charleston is my home so I really dig the references!

The story was cut and paste? Pages 4 - 6 repeating pages 1 -3. Then there was the mention of premature ejaculation. Sorry, my bad: pre-cum. The dialog was pretty good and the plot was fine.

The story was copied and repeated. Great otherwise.

More please, what happens from here on? I hope she decides to stay and they become a couple and maybe even make a baby. I enjoyed the lovely build up to a very sexy lovemaking but I didn't want to read it again right away.

Would have given 5 stars but the spelling is atrocious. Otherwise it’s a good story, well paced, dialogue is well above average.

it started off good, interesting, even humbling, justwhen it all set up. Bam the duplication was a real bumer! there could be so much more to write.

Good 👍 read but need to get copy section removed

Really good, but, as others have mentioned, the entire story is repeated after the conclusion on page 3, about 3/4 of the way down the page.

I'm not going to mention the double copy of the story since others have already addressed the issue. 😒 But I will make mention that story tags are NOT backwards compatible in the search engine. In other words, I can't filter out Bondage stories when searching for brother/sister incest. Therefore you should assume the responsibility of putting a ⚠️ TRIGGER WARNING ⚠️ for BDSM in the preface or first sentence so that readers such as myself could walk away before encountering something that we find distasteful.

With the exception of the Bondage, I thought

I'm not certain why my comment was saved before I finished writing it. However...

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With the exception of the Bondage, I thought that you did a pretty good job. There's numerous typos and other mistakes that a good proofreading should have caught, but on the plus side I enjoyed your use of a real location and actual places to be a great addition to your fictional story. 4/5

Besides the need to edit, it was an excellent story

Very nice, duplication aside. Plenty of room for an epilogue chapter. Really enjoyed the romance. 5/5

Dont shave her pussy

It was a great story all 3 pages, not sure why you printed it twice pages 4-6 ?

Would be nice if you gave us another chapter or two, worth some more reading on this story!!

I'm trying out the Vanilla oil on someone tomorrow!

Good story only spoilt by you repeating the whole thing in the final pages ... perhaps take the time to delete the extra pages

One of the best ive ever read omg, ❤️

A good start. One can only hope you'll edit it to remove the repeated portion and continue on after they return downstairs to continue their discussion. There's a lot of room for growth and improvement in this story but I can't rate it higher than a 3 until it's edited and completed.

I was so excited when I saw how long this story was, 6 pages, only to be gutted when it repeated itself lol! That was absolutely fantastic! I loved it! Perfect build up and perfect conclusion! Only problem is I'm gagging for more of it! I'd love to read more about them, you're a really good writer, I think anyway. I really hope you write more about these 2 though, that'd be superb!

This was a very good story. Ya we saw the last 3 pages were an Oops, but hell shit happens. The only sad part about this story was the author never Bothered to give us another chapter or too, that would have made it sweet. So many thing her brother could have showed her, and then at their age they lived happily ever after together....

Super hot, though went too far with a whip on their first time. Love older brother and sister stories, no parents involved, they're mature and can make decisions, and are adults who already have feelings for each other. Perfect.