All Comments on 'Fucking My Soldier'

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True_enchantresTrue_enchantresabout 14 years ago
a lil criticism

He undoes (his) jeans and pulls his cock out from his boxers. I can feel his hips press up (against) my ass..... these are the only 2 errors i found but u are a amazing writer i will be looking for u work

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