All Comments on 'Fulfillment 04'

by KemMyst

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MizTMizTover 12 years ago
I'd be P.O."d too

if I were Lyssa. First they tell Lyssa she must kill the bad guy which goes against everything she believes in. So to save face w /the pack and protect Emmett's rep as Beta, she agrees to the fight. So in the middle of the fight Emmett and Alpha Randell jump in and do the killing. Did they not trust Lyssa? She had already killed one man. Maybe the human side of her needed to feel threatened to allow her to kill him! Now we will never know. Stupid egotistical men anyway.

I like that Erich and Maddie have mated. I'm totally surprised at Joanna and her decision about Nate. And you gotta love Calvin, the ex Alpha so used to getting his way, still working on his plan to get Steph.

As always I loved this chapter and am eager for the next. However I do understand that life happens beyond the pages of Lit hehe-he . So when the next chapter is ready, I along w/many others will be patiently waiting.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
The wolves in your stories are great mates.

I admire how you're able to pursue the stories of four or five couples, each with relationships at markedly different places.

I was surprised that Lyssa didn't carry out her part of the execution with her ability to project message waves, since she'd helped free Joanna and herself that way. She was in such a poor state of mind that it was inevitable she'd been unable to defend herself adequately, much less be an effective aggressor. She needs something positive to happen to help restore her balance.

Also enjoying the reluctant Stephanie and the determined Calvin. He's going to need someone to help him when it's realized that his son is a villain, not an Alpha. It's fun to watch Stephanie fighting with herself.

Looking forward to your having time to add the next chapter. Thanks for this holiday treat!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lyssa has PTSD.

She needs mental health counseling.

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
great chaptert

I hope lyssa gets some help soon very enjoyable chapter looking forward to your next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lyssa still....

pisses me of the way she treats her sweet,loving mate all he wants to do is cherish her and she is constantly hurting him with her attitude. She has been a wolf for a long time now and yet still carries on like she has only just been forced into it. I thought she loved him it's about time she acted like it.

Jo is also annoying Nat bares his soul to her and she just dismisses it and tells him she is not sure she want him as her mate yet after throwing herself at him for days. She such a spoilt brat she needs to grow up and think of Nat's feeling.

Willieone..couldn't log in today and refused to post as anonymous altogether. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
no

no on cal and stephanie. he had a mate so she will feel like a rebound or something. jo and nathan is an upset with her attitude. lyssa and jo should have been allowed to kill the ross wolf. if they couldnt do it with strenght then her mind gift.

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

Maybe Stephanie will heal so that she is able to welcome Calvin into her life. I cannot help but wonder if Lys is pregnant. What's really going on with her. Inquiring minds want to know.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
Great as always

I hope Stephanie will eventually warm up to Cal. I have the feeling that he will need her support as his mate when it comes time to take down his son. I also wonder if Lyssa might be pregnant. She also could use some counseling, but the pack doesn't seem to understand her issues and where else can she turn for help. I wonder if Cal could help her since he is older and not part of her pack.

allimbaallimbaover 12 years ago
drama!

I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This is depressing. I keep reading and 3 installments in and I've never seen Emmet and Lyssa happy. :(

Shanin1967Shanin1967almost 9 years ago
I'm spellbound!

I've become absolutely obsessed with the life of this pack. I can't put them down.

lonewolfalphalonewolfalphaabout 8 years ago
this is a great story

the only gripe that i have and it is a very small one is how affected she was by having to fight that bastard in the circle mabey it is just me and i am more prone to my animalistic/vandictive nature or the fact that i already belive dirt bags like him should get what he got and alot worse for some him i would have killed quick but the other one i would have played with ripping him to shreds before removing what it is that made him a male but like i said maby that is becuase i think those kind of people need that any way i know main stream human society does not condone such things but when they act the way thoes scum bags did they take them self out of human society thats why i always say i would not make a good cop becueas if i was going after some one like that i would not bring them in i would put a bullet in there head and then feed then to the gators and that would be the end of it the so called justice system only works if you have money look at the many cases were some one was accused of doing something terible but becuease they have alot of money to spend on less than scum laywers they walk if we would adopt the were justice system there would be a lot less scumbags in the world becuase evean with money they would face the same laws and i do agree with Lyssa there should be a councile that could evean hold alphas accountable for the scumbag ways i hope that his dad gets to mate again and takes the pack back so he can get what is comming to him

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Lyssa is on my last nerve!

It's becoming more and more difficult to tolerate Lyssa. Yes, difficult things have happened to her but it is depressing to read how she handles it. I really hope this changes soon.

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