All Comments on 'Fulfillment 12'

Lovely as usual. I was so caught up in the story I didn't miss the missing sex.

It felt like you were trying to squeeze to much into this chapter and rushed it a little. Look forward to the next chapter.

Okay I'm crying now. are you proud of yourself? I understand how stephanie feels and I am really pulling for her... if anyone deserves true love its her and calvin...

Great job!

I have pulled for Steph for so long. I have had faith in Calvin from the beginning! Now you want to slowly pull her past from her, I want to scream........I want her to heal right away so she can start to feel the love that Calvin has to give her and that she more than deserves....But as an author, job well done. Everyone feels Steph pain. She is such a well written character and may end up being my favorite and you know how long I've w/you! I really do look forward to the next chapter....oh by the way I like the newly mated couple, it's kind of about time, you know what I mean...hehe-he

the pup wrestling with alpha wyeth was kinda cute. i just dont understand how a pack could allow one of their own females to be beaten and raped by fellow pack members arent the females and pups to be protected at all costs.

I think your chapters get better with each new post.

I really enjoy the pace of Steph and Cal's story. Seeing how he is so patient and willing to love again and to show Steph that she is capable to be loved unconditionally by someone. Steph still has some healing to do and I'm glad she is letting him in.

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Calvin has made so much progress with Stephanie. I hope that she will eventually accept him as her mate. She is certainly strong enough to be Alpha female, although she may lack patience to deal with petty squabbles.

I think that Joanna should still attend college locally. She would eventually resent Nathan if she doesn't.

It is great that Jo has mated, just wish she could have stayed with her pack. I am so sad for Stephanie!!! I am hoping that her and Calvin get closer soon. Can't wait to ready more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Stephanie's story his my favorite in this little collage. Very touching and very well done.

Still need to work on explaining who is talking/acting. I love how you come to care about most of the characters, I wil not lie I cried a few times reading these stories. Most excelent work

I have read all 3 story groupings on the Wyeth pack. I enjoyed them very much. Good structure and flow. Though brief it is suffiecient to get the main point across. I also like this saga it made me feel good and excited for the action/problems encountered. Keep it up. I look forward to more.