All Comments on 'Full House Ch. 02'

The story was fine, but your use of "...have a party" really confused me for a bit. It should be, for example, "Hellen is going to a party". The first use of this phrase made me believe she was hosting a party.

Anonymous, thank you for the feedback. I'm not a native English speaker, so I sometimes struggle with some constructions, expressions, etc. I know it can be confusing to the reader, but the fact is that the readership is 99% in English here, so I prefer to write not-so-perfect stories in English than a grammar-perfect story in another language that 5 people will read. :-)