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All Comments on 'Full House Ch. 07 - Final'

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reekerreekeralmost 4 years ago
I enjoyed it.

One very enjoyable smooth flowing fantasy. Thanks.

Frankie1952Frankie1952almost 4 years ago

Wow, this bloke is in sexual heaven and I think he knows it but then the ladies seem to be pretty happy with the arrangement too. Well done thank you and please write some more like this one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
consistency

Several times you mixed up the names of your characters. As an author, you should at a minimum be able to keep their identities straight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I like Hellen the best but i've always been a sucker for big tits

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

get his vacectomy reversed, maybe have children?

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I just want to thank you all for your feedback. It helps me with the writing itself (style, pace, etc) and with the language (as I'm not an English native speaker). Please feel free to send me any constructive feedback, even negative ones.

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