by starsinger
You need to stop when you are ahead, the line about the 46DDD turned the story from a fantasy to a child's fantasy. Make your stories a little more believable and they will get rated better. Unfortunately I will have to give this a 2/5 due to that "huge" error.
Don't let them get your goat, there just nay-sayers. My now ex-wife was 46E and they were always right THERE!
Learn about bra sizes. The number is the measurement around a woman’s chest below the breasts. This means the girl in this story has a chest bigger around than most men. A young girls size would be closer to 32. So the previous commenters were correct, you wrote her to be fat.