All Comments on 'Fun at Work Pt. 02'

Superb writing; excellent story. Please continue!

To understand this chapter, is is necessary to read the previous one, as it is only only way to truly do justice to this excellent story. With this second chapter, one can enjoy it even more for the quality of the writing, the marvelous love scene that is part of the plot, and the appeal of the main characters. There has been a noticeable improvement in the style, prose, grammar, and punctuation of the author's writing over the years, and one can only hope for many more submissions from this wonderful story teller in the future. Five Stars.