All Comments on 'Fun for the Whole Family'

I like it and hope there will be more.

Awesome first story! I loved it! However, the ending did seem rather abrupt and you left a number of story lines unfinished. What exactly was David's reaction when Janet relayed her story about her sleepover? Did she tell him about her and her sons? What did Brian and Becky do after Scott and Tim left? Did Lisa follow through with her promise to her brothers? A longer followup chapter would be fantastic. Five stars and a favorite point!

Both moms need to sport baby bumps and lisa too

Great story, my daughters and I can't wait for ch,2

Great start, part 2, ASAP, and we want to know what happens when she reports back to hubby.

great first time out story. well done. i hope you keep writing - it's a great start to the story but we need more!

Loved it - keep them cumming!

Very sexy, made me rock hard.

Nice spank bank IJS0904. I hope the boys get to give their sister some good old sexual therapy in the second part. Maybe both families will...

Hell, what do I know? I'm just the perv reader, you're the author.

seems like more combinations await!

Sounds like the beginning of a beautiful friendship between the two families. I see an all out orgy in the making. A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I’m in love with this!

I got little mixed up when Scott became Greg .

And didn't Shawn & Evan start off as Randy & Jeff?