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Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago
Very good

story , Originsunknown! I love a bit of Sci-fi with the erotic!

JSipesJSipesabout 3 years ago

That was different but I enjoyed it. I got lost a few times but still gave you 5 stars for your originality. I wouldn’t reading a part two.

NadiePreguntameNadiePreguntameover 1 year ago

I'm also an avid sci-fi reader, and enjoyed very much the background story. I'd like a bit more of characters development, but even how it is now worked great.

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...