All Comments on 'Fun in Penang'

has April become Abby on page 3. Still, a good story -- 4 stars.

Good story but please get the names straight! The sister had three different names of the course of the story.

It would really be handy if you made a note of the name of your characters so that you don't keep mixing them up!

Marie/Maire/Maria?

What happened to April?

Where did Abby suddenly appear from?

What is the difference between 'hear and 'here'?

Hot, but the sister had at least 3 different names. A proof reader would go a long way.

Thanks for spotting that. Can’t believe I made just a stupid error I’ll try and re submit it with the changes.