All Comments on 'Fun Times at the Movies'

Amazing story, great build up, please keep up the amazing writing!

@soberfun9618 thank you so much, the encouragement really means a lot!!

Fun at the Movies, just the author's second story, is definitely an improvement on the previous one. The writing is better, the story is more in depth, with better characters. There is a dreamy romantic mood to this story, which is truly marvelous, although a drive-in setting would have been even better. That said, one can only hope that there will be many more stories from this fine author.

@Anonymous thank you so much!! The honest feedback means a lot and it truly helps me become not only a better writer overall but to also work on my individual weak points. It's also nice to hear what people would like to see for the future. I'm working on my next story now and I promise to make improvements and truly put my best foot forward with character improvements and making the stories more in depth.