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Anonymousabout 15 years agoSilly and poorly-written
Never WWD (Write While Drunk). This was some of the worst writing I've ever read. The setup was murky, the language was stilted, and the word usage embarrassing. (That last sentence was a groaner.)<p>If you intend to continue, please get an editor.
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