All Comments on 'Fun with Professor Montgomery'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Naughty

wish you were in my class

naughtystudent123naughtystudent123about 8 years agoAuthor

Thanks Anonymous. Are you a teacher/professor?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Could be better.

Grammar and spelling mistakes distract from the story. Wish the story was a bit more consistent. Other then that it was ok.

redlion75redlion75about 8 years ago

is this just a school fling or do they last?

naughtystudent123naughtystudent123about 8 years agoAuthor

It is just a fling. And what spelling?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Needs some refinements

The story could be fleshed out to make the characters more believable. And your grammar and punctuation need work. For instance using "your" when you should have used "you're."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Spoiled by poor English.

You are = you're NOT your!

Hayla86Hayla86over 7 years ago

If I had to sum it up in one word: Imature

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