All Comments on 'Fur, Fun, & New Year's'

What a sensuous story!! Only one thing missing. If she's a catgirl, some sensual clawing would've added so much to this erotic tale!! Him knowing she was a cat, her clawing would've added quite a bit to her deflowering. Could've been a tad longer. She was really sexy, but the cat didn't build a lot. She could've been a tad more primal!! But, nonetheless, a hot topic, and what was there was quite sensual!! Great storyline!!

a good base for a series of storys, i agree with the above/below post about clawing + more primal.

Also more detail about the catgirl would be good such as her hight etc.

also you'll get loads more feedback if you let people send u anon e-mails.

Awesome story. I've been looking for a story like this for a while. I love how Sara seems so innocent. More stories in your world would be great too! Definately more stories with Sara.

very well written, I'd love to see this become more!

You really need to turn this thing into a series, I loved it.

That was freaking awesome. More is always better

Great story, great writing, great everything. Write more in this storyline. You must. I disagree that Sara should be more primal, but agree that you should make her do more catty things. Clawing and maybe a little more use of the tail would help out.

Excellent work, thanks for writing it.

it was awsome, loved it through the whole. i defently think there should be more! well cant wait =)

Very nice writing. Please make this into a series, it rocks

if you're going to make this a series and asking other people to determine if it should or shouldn't be a series, well heres my answer. "Hell YES!!!" I for one liked this story. and I hope that you do make it into a series, i would love to see it.

You have created such a wonderful world in which to play. Now is the time to really define it and spread it out with all the different species and combinations of matings possible. Please write more. You have a wonderful style that invites the reader in to your vivid imagination

Michael

Awesome submission and awesome writing. I applaud you. Please write more.

I think you've created a very original and moving piece. Most things are just banal and boring. Yours creates something so much more deep, and because of that, so much more satisfying, more enjoyable.

Definitely keep on writing, your very good. would love to read more from the same world, not too fussed about using the same characters, as long as its the same calibre.

I am beyond surprised to hear that this is your first erotic submission. This story is amazing, it combines a captivating world (which i believe everybody has dreamt about at least once) with an excellent backstory and characters. I am going to keep my eye on you from now on, and i urge everybody else to do the same.

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i am only disappointed that this is your only entry

this story was well written, descriptive, and playfully intriguing

please write more

Please bring more chapters it's gr8 work. I wanna know what'll happen when Sara find out she's pregnant by her friend.