All Comments on 'Fur'

StangStar06 u amaze me how you like to write defrint kinda story's and i love how u will try anything :) ha haha Funny story to

PS StangStar06 this story has a mix of your stuff with a mix of JC (JazCullen) in it ... Both my fav authors and that's a complacent Since here work is Awesome

... but at least as twice as many words as needed. Careful re-writing would cut it to a third.

The foreshadowing happened very early in the story, and after that it was simply typing until the end. The story line was good, though - in many things less is more, and fiction such as this is one of them. You need to introduce the characters - check

They all do their respective things - check Story ends with everybody living happily every after - check The repeated violence added nothing to the story

"In a few weeks I'd be able to buy all the short fat assed blonds I wanted. They have a factory out near Vegas where they make them to order anyway."

Like a breathe of fresh air.

You turn a mean phrase at times.

I thought your story was great! i also loved how you changed up your usual plot, added something different. maybe you should think about writing another sci/fi or nonhuman story?

The Mustang didn't fit into this story very well.

I prefer the longer one but I understand the decision to dumb down the version for this site due to the profusion of mental midgets in LW these days :/

Like you said, a bit different. A;ways liked your stories and will keep on reading. Hope others enjoy them as much as I do.

Great story line!! I liked both versions for what it's worth. Looking forward to the next story and thanks for sharing.

I've also read both versions, and while I preferred the longer version, this one was great too. You've really got a good mind for Horror/SciFi. Maybe you should try a straight one someday. Hey, it can't be worse than Twilight!

Weird. Enjoyable, but weird. Too long. I guess that I'll have to read the other version. I would have listed it under a different category.

Enjoyed the story immensely, especially your stream of consciousness paragraphs like when he first meets Nadja. I also was very surprised when the whole story was almost over and no Mustang had appeared. Saved on page 5, so all is well.

Keep up the great work,

Alan B

Different? Well, yes a bit. Loved it.

I enjoy your stories at the best of times, but a story with Werewolf in it? My kind of story, 10 stars would be given if I could. This story had it all for me thanks for writing your stories, and keep them coming.

Man this was way off the reservation for you. I loved it! I didn't make the connection of the werewolf until the third page. I thought it was a man in drag or getting a sex change and was really weirded out. But when the moon thing came up I thought it was great and there is a lot for a follow up story. Great read can't wait for next weeks story.

a little far out. to much sex and no stds or aids how is that possible from his ex.now he is going to be producing werewolves. a science friction story. IT DOESNOT BELONG IN LOVING WIVES.

fur ever together in woods or home, TK U MLJ LV NV

great writing but little wierd

Very enjoyable story. I'm interested in reading the other version. How can I find it?

Great story... How do you come up with this stuff? 5 stars

This is an interesting fantasy and nonhuman story. The other version on SOL (storiesonline.net) is a little darker and it connects SS06's last year story "November", but the end of that version is positive as this is.

Nice writing; not too long!

But I would vote for the darker, more intriqueing one. Still an excellent story.

Tx stang everyone needs a little hair of the wolf sometimes

nice story my friend........lol

That I'm one of the people who think some of your stories are too long. After reading both versions of this one I can admit that I was wrong. This version has no teeth. I love the other version. Stang this also helped me to decide my answer on a question that came up in the forums last week. If you were trapped on an island with a literotica author who would you want? The four choices were Rehnquest, Steele, DG, or StangStar. I picked Steele. But honestly I think I was wrong. This was a great story.

you had me worried a whole story and no mustang,,then you redeemed yourself on page 5,,LOL A little differant type of plot but I liked it a lot. I'm no english critic so I leave that to the haters ,,but I hope you keep writing,,, I always look forward to thursdays and your new submission,Thank You for the efforts,,M1A1,,,5 STARS AGAIN

Loved it. Anything about wolves/werewolves gets a good vote from me. But this story should have been in Horror or maybe Whorror. I gave this ***** I took one off for wrong catagory. Keep write I want to see a wolf driving a mustang.

I was so worried about the Mustang, I was starting to feel ill, but there IT IS!! On page 5. The relief is emotional and with Werewolves this is the best story Ever on Loving Wives!! This is what all willing Cuckolds and Wimps should read to show them why we are in this category, my Friends.

Life is good.

My favorite werewolf story ever. I like the longer version too. But like

Most of your stories I love the fact that even after the heartbreak a new

and better love is waiting. Just like with me. There's a guy below who claims

this story shouldn't be in LW. Hello guy it's a story about a guy whose fiancé

Cheated. Then he falls for a werewolf who also cheated. Get a clue

Piqued my curiosity about the shorter version, so I thought I'd come check it out.

I had actually halfway liked it, though as always it is WAAAAAY too long.

Well, I was all set to say something really nice, and right up front you hit us with that self-congratulatory bullshit about being such a great writer. You know, referring to those with 'limited imaginations'.

So one star from me.

Next time, don't pat yourself on the back so fucking hard.

Isn't that what we usually hear? Well it not true generally and it certainly not true this week.

I like creativity of this story a lot.

About it being in the wrong category, I suppose you could make that argument, but no one really complained about Chrissie.

I said it before, you have the talent to write for more than just the LW category.

Oh and Mikothebaby. Damn good job!

Thanks for another good Thursday read.

But as usual well writen

though I prefered the longer version. As I am neither 5, nor suffering from ADD I have a long enough attention span to read a longer story. It seems like a longer story has more time to develop into something more interesting. Great story (either version) again this week. Looking forward to reading what you come up with for next week. Thank god for Miko Baby, don't want that comma key to wear out.

How about a crack at vampyres, just think about Kate Beconsale as you write it. As for the mustang not fitting in, add a lift kit so it fits into the acerage lifestyle.

got their nose bent out of shape over the introduction. I read this on the other site and enjoyed the longer version but anyone with half a clue knows this LW site is "all about the simpletons" now. Most of the readers here simply look for some adultery to jack off to then cry about it in the comments. Those looking for a longer story can check it out on SoL.

I think the author is actually paying attention! Love how you're breaking away from the formulaic, template you've been using and getting into actually telling a story!! Wow. Even though there were elements in this story that I don't normally go for, it was still a very entertaining read. Now THIS is more like it. Still a little too much over explaining and repetition, with the spastic woman thrown in for good measure, but at least you're getting creative with everything else.

Bravo, very nice effort.

Post Script. I noticed that even though it's not applicable in this tale, there are many commenters still overly obsessed with the whole cuckold phenomenon. WTF?!?! LOL

What a piece of utter shit.

An interesting departure from your usual, SS. I liked it!

Fun story. Thanks for the effort.

just that now it is Loving Wolves !

Adored it!

Well it's a SAD, SAD fact that next week you have your work cut out for you if you're going to top this story thats sweeter then a Krispy Kreme smoothie. TY Miko btw.

I kind of hate the whole twilight crap. Never saw the appeal of that series or this story.

I know a lot of folks like this stuff... Its just not my cup of tea/ blood . The other version IS better though

is definitely better; in fact, it's almost a different story. I always look forward to your stories every week, keep writing!

It was a fun read!

there are quite a few lowbrows (see the half dozen or so that constantly refer to SS06 as "my friend" - how fucking sad is that) who have the attention span of a fruit fly and the wits to match. Besides, that asshat duna is required to leave a comment longer than the story so SS06 did him a favor by posting a short version here.

I almost thought you weren't going to mention a mustang. Great story. You never let me down.

you are doing better with your women. liked the scifi part of the story. hell everyone loves your stories. damn good read. another 5.

100 acres isn't really that much when you are talking about woodland areas. One acre is slightly smaller than a football field, and there are 640 acres in a square mile.

So unless they were in a deep valley it is unlikely that they "own everything you can see".

Well done!

Nice to Read something a little Different. still got his Revenge on those who tried to take advantage of him.

AFTER READING THIS TALE OF SCI-FI, OR IN DAYS OF YORE THE OCCULT, BLACK MAGIC, SHIFT SHAPERS, WERE WOLVES AND VAMPIRES. MOST PEOPLE FIND IT DIFFICULT TO ACCEPT THE FACT A FEW CENTURIES AGO THIS WAS THE NORM. read ROSES, WHY DO WE REFUSE TO BELIEVE THIS COULD HAPPEN. THINK LOCH NESS, BIG FOOT, YETI AND OTHERS WORLD WIDE. OR WITH MOESTERAS LATEST "DIAMONDS". ANY ONE WHO HAS LIVED ON A FARM OR IN SMALL COMMUNITIES ARE AWARE OF ANIMALS AND THEIR LOYALTY TO THEIR "MASTERS""OWNERS". THESE ARE TALES WHICH CAN POSSIBLY NEVER BE PROVEN OR DISPROVEN. SO WITH THAT MINDSET TRY READING WITH OPENNESS AND THE TALES UNFOLD IN DIFFERNT GLORY. TK U MLJ LV NV

but a fun read

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. I look forward to your next one.

Thank-you Sid.

But you are right SS06, this version is truncated and soppy. The longer version has a harder, darker edge and is far more satisfying. Still a good read - either version. Thanks for your weekly contribution. This site is wallowing and your stories lift the level significantly.

With the title and the initial intro for Nadja, "Her nose was a bit long and her teeth seemed sharper than they should. Her canines were especially pronounced."

It was kind of obvious where the story was going, everything hangs together so it removed any surprise to the story, but it is a good and enjoyable read.

Please gang, this is not Sci-Fi, this is Fantasy, like the Atrocity Archives of Charles Stross....

TY

I frickin' loved it! 'Nuff said!

That's the very best compliment a writer could receive from a reader, that we are able to truly escape into a story. Thanks for writing and sharing!!!

Nice blending sci-fi and loving wive stroies

Inadvertently, that was the first "non-human" story I've read on this site. Otherwise, I really enjoyed the story-telling & the characters, kind of an adult Grimm fairy tale. The people were cartooney but compelling, the tale progressed quickly. The only real surprise was how late it took for the Mustang to appear; I was beginning to think we were only going to see a burnt-out F150. Nice job.

;-) 5*

And good old steve, bill kevin whatever got sweet tits forever and ever?

Good stuff stang - you always keep the community swingin' 5*

Oh yeah gotta share this - latest x_John_x compilation ... and John you're giving my inbox a beating..

Cuck Wimp Willing Subhuman Cuckold

04/27/12

"The Willing cucks hate this story and apparently have no sense of humour. So well done for this story. I will apologise in advance for the comments that will be directed towards me and others that like this story for what it is, I wonder which readers will get a hook caught in their mouth from the line I just cast? Personally I thought this story was very good.I will write stories and comment on stories with whatever handle or username or anon username I wish to use. And the only people who can stop me are the people in charge of website. just so you know I showed your comment on my story to my friends at work, they all think you are truly insane and really need help. They also think you take life far to seriously and think you should lighten up. Yes they have seen other comments by you on my other stories and my comments and they really do enjoy your comments, it's something to laugh about while we have a coffee at work in the morning and at lunch break, so please keep your comments coming it is great entertainment for all of us. Oh and once again my wife says hi, you know, the woman you think isn't there, well trust me my friend she is real . So have at it my willing cukold friend."

Over coffee??? Brilliant.

Our media have us believing we must look, smell and sound like whatever they deem the hottest things. In this story the hero is found by his match-mate. I liked the story and found the flow of the acion just about perfect. Thanks...

I read the comments first and now I cant stop laughing. WTF?

It is good to see a different LW as opposed to the 'cookie cutter' which is so prevalent. I liked both stories, but definitely give the edge to the SOL version. The November tie in was excellent. Your imagination is impressive. Well done!

Thank you!

M1

Liked both stories but liked the story at the other place better . Thanks

Not your typical LW story, was it? But what we really ought to notice and appreciate is what a good story-teller SS has become. Thanks for another really enjoyable tale! A wilder ride than usual, but certainly worth it!

Cordially,

ohio

all's Fur in love and war

Have to admit not a fan of furry stories but this was really enjoyable thank you

SS06

I really enjoyed your story and this one was different for You. But if you own a Kindle there are many of these stories out there. Of course! You gave it a different bent than others I have read!!!

So another 5 stars for a really good story that was worth reading and appreciate your continued writing. Always nice to look forward to your submission no matter how busy I get, I go back and find your submission if I can't be there for the unveiling. You are impressive to keep creating. Please keep it up!

Thanks again for posting and please feel free to go "a little off the beaten track" again because this was fun to read!!!!!

As I said X_witless_X you are now the little troll when once you were the big bad troll hunter your comment is proof enough of how low you have sunk to. Sorry Stang X_witless_X and I are just having a private and public war of words. It will probably go for some time.

personal little bitch fight you're having in the comments. Go swing your purses at each other by emails or take the catfight to 4chan or something. What a total fucking tool.

But Mr x_Witless_x is too scared to contact me, I even asked to meet him in person but again he has declined. So the war of words that HE started will continue. Unless of course he grows up and actually comments on stories and not other comments, which is highly unlikely. So expect more "Handbags at Dawn" from my X_witless_x friend and myself.

guess no one is reading his shitty stories so he has to rant and rave on a story that actually gets comments and readers, effin pathetic. lol

Maybe you really should think about widening your spectrum a little. You know maybe some other week you write a cheating Story set a pirate setting or something.

"lol @ johndoe. guess no one is reading his shitty stories so he has to rant and rave on a story that actually gets comments and readers, effin pathetic. lol"

So the approaching half a million people that have read my stories are just figments of the sites imagination? LOL. And how do you know the stories are 'shitty'? you must have read one or two of them yourself. LOL.

I think anon just counted all the red H stories you have compared to the red H stories Stangstar has submitted. What is that, about 34-0?

Really enjoyed the full story more. This is a really good version

Thanks.

SS, Thank you for all your contributions. I admit that there were times when I thought your stories were a little too formulaic (though always well written). You have gone from writing good cheating wife stories to great cheating wife stories where you're displaying some wonderfully creative variances. Despite horror, sci-fi, fantasy themes the 'loving wife' category is where these belong.

Besides, where else can you get such bizarre and prolific feedback?

Thanks again,

Ter

Always a good read, SS.

By the way, I'm also a FORD man, but being aussie, my car's a little different. It's a '74 XB GT coupe. Had it about 8 yrs now. You might know it, Mad Max had a modified one.

As to your story, it's a breath of fresh air. Not so serious, but like another reader said, still belongs squarely in Loving Wives.

If I was your protagonist I woulda done just like he did. He'll be happy for life and want for nothing.

This one was all fun and games heh for the protagonist anyway -

Although there were no wives loving or otherwise - technically til the very end -I too agree it belongs here -

Very well done - thank you as always for sharing with us

5 stars and this all what is best described for this story

I love this story. One fun story to read. Thank you for writing it for me/us

Loved it! Different, not the same old thing! Wish I could give it more than 5! Maybe they can add an oak leaf cluster? Great. Don't think I read the other verision. what name is it under? Great Tale!

Rob Conner

... TV destroys brains ... HeHe - loved that one!

he never has to discipline their offspring. A female wolf will kill anything that threatens her pups or die trying. That's right a wolf's offspring are called pups not cubs. Cute story*****

different and really great. nothing better than a mate that knows only you. gave it a 5

Love the little twist in this one... Oh an BTW... a dogs has pups, a wolf has cubs. In the pack, the alpha male would be able to correct any of the cubs without the mother doing anything. Intentionally or not, Stang made her an alpha female, and she'd only mate with an alpha male. So he wouldn't have to worry. Beta females share their mates with other beta females in a true pack. But since this is fiction, the writer can make whatever rules for his world.

Again, I like the twist in this LW story.

Myhands316

a better ending for sure

it isnt always a nip but a mouthful. TK U MLJ LV NV

Liked it :-)

Sorry, I do not care for supernatural or non-human aspects. This is not to say that it isn't a legitimate literary subject; I just don't care to read about it. So, gave it a 4. Hope I don't run into more of this type without prior warnings.

I found the story to be interesting and enjoyable to read. It is nice to spend some time reading a story that adds a twist to the cheating partner and breakup plot. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us and I certainly hope to read much more of your writing in the future.

Never read such a crazy, convoluted lot of nonsense for year. Just loved it. You are one seriously twisted person.

to a point. Werewolves I have no problem with. Weirdo wives ditto.

BUT

Two dead men and two maimed in an alley behind a restaurant, and it's open for business as normal? Just a couple of cops wandering round chatting casually to customers? That is taking fantasy too far.

I loved the story. I laughed so hard I got tears in my eyes. What a wonderful

imaagination. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Thank you !!!! BS

BUT, the only sex was when her brother was screwing Drea if I remember correctly. Of course he and the wolf-woman had sex but there were no details. I had not read this one before but it was a good change of pace. Thank you for writing.

cant say it enough - i love this fucking story. 5 always a 5!

This story had it all I read this story straight through in a short amount of time on my cellphone. I needed the entertainment bad. And You really delivered. Bikers incest gangbang wild sex werewolf millionaire prostitute/waitress violence please this story blew my mind. I thought towards the end there titillating about Jack being lightening fast when Gus described to Jack about breaking the bikers jaw I thought that Jack was a werewolf too. There were references made by Nadja to Jack that Jack was her mate and she wanted to mate with him. I don't think I have read a story that straddled between real life and fantasy that blended like a mocha latte. You are one fucking great writer. Best story I've ever read and should be considered for a movie. Thank you for the ride!

Aww..puppies...!!!

Imagine the sequels as the pack get older..?

This is, I think, the third or forth time I've read this. Always straight through, always puts a big grin on my face. Its got everything - Love & Hate, Retribution & redemption, millionaires & poverty, werewolves, hot-rod Mustangs - all improbably but oh so neatly worked into an erotic short story! It reminds me, in a way, of "the perfect Country& Western song" that Steve Goodman wrote and David Allan Coe sang, "You Never Even Call Me by My Name." You know - "Momma, trains, trucks, prison, rain, gettin' drunk ..."

Thanks, StangStar06, for another fun read.