All Comments on 'Futa House'

Wish this was real would have loved to be Chris, may have killed me but what a great way to go

a long story but well worth the read, hope we get more stories about Chris,Ashley and his mom

A story that describes heaven. Loved those girls

I hope that you have a series for this or even a short story of what happens next please and thank you

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Seriously I'm mad that it's not longer. I love every character and subplot and wish more chapters and/or spinoffs come from this story. Made me cum so many times and made me feel wholesome and happy.

On all levels this story is simply legendary. If only such a place existed in real life. I wouldnt mind a continuation of this story on some level. I think my favorite thing was how long and elaborate the story was. Didnt want it to end!

I just wish there had been details of how large their girth was. Were all the girlcocks the same length? Or a better description of what each girl looked like, and same with Miss C’s cock size. We got one of Chris’s but no one else

I have a quick story I hope I can get a reply from. The part where the futa girls watch a movie and "grind in each others laps" what does it mean? They fucked? Or blowjobs? Or hands?

Rape and incest, really? Trash! Not for me.

I loved the tale as well, to be in the emotions an feelings with Chris, feeling everything he went through the pain, confusion, the desire, the love an the joy the bond of everything an everyone.

That's a life that would be the sweetest.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

ВНИМАНИЕ! Данный комментарий является неприемлемым для мужчины, который считает себя равным Высшей Красоте и тем более БОЖЕСТВЕННОЙ КРАСОТЕ ( FUTA( GODDESS).

Охранительная история! Жаль что такие БОГИНИ не существуют в реальности ( shemele, lediboy и т. д. не считаются ), ну или Высшие Женщины, которые способны просто заполнить тебя их красотой, но неспособны наградить тебя за то удовольствие, которое ты им доставил. Я хотел бы быть на месте Криса, потому-что, я считаю что Красота которая имеет Могущество, а уж тем более БОЖЕСТВЕННАЯ КРАСОТА рождается для того чтобы - Жить и Наслаждаться Жизнью, а мы мужчины, которые по статусу являемся ниже ЕЁ, не просто должны, а даже ОБЯЗАНЫ ДАТЬ ЕЙ ТО УДОВОЛЬСТВИЕ, КОТОРОЕ ОНА ПОЖЕЛАЕТ!!! Так что, Крис находится там где должен находиться мужчина, хотя не всегда, ведь такой КРАСОТЕ нужно обслуживание не только в постели, но и в бытовых делах, как и во всём остальном что ОНА ПОЖЕЛАЕТ, а мужчина будет способен ИСПОЛНИТЬ. Завидую тебе Крис, ведь ты находишься в РАЮ который называется ♥️GODDESSES HOUSE!♥️

Loved the story and so jealous that I'm not a Futa fuck toy. Being fucked and fed cum by so many girls every day all day would be the ultimate. I do love eating cum.

This has to be the best series I've read so far on literotica!!! Would love to see this made in a cartoon ❤️

Excellent story...I hope it continues for many more chapters..like what happens to all of them once college is over and they continue on with there lives..assuming Chris and Ashley get married, but what happens to the rest of the gang from futa house from here on ?

This story kinda passed me off, rape much. Mom whoring her son out, abandonment to get used. I no more wanted to punch some balls then I did here. In the end it wasn't a terrible read.

i only got a few pages in, but it feels pretty rapey. it didnt really seem like chris has much of a choice, and the scenes with his mother made it even worse. i enjoy futa content, but this was just rapey, and incestuous

Loved it, love the way Chris was turned from ashore k guy to a total butt slut, I enjoyed the way the sex was varied, but now he has passed is first year there is so.e much to explore like bondage, dressing ect and we still the secret the twins have great work

loved every word

hope we can read the next semester too or

maybe marige Ashley take part in Futaporn whit the mom of Natalie

I don't usually read FUTA stories even though I occasionally read gay stories - mostly I like to read straight stories and swing stories. This one peaked my interest since it was well written from the beginning -and it's subject matter wasn't like anything I had read previously, except gay stories.

The whole thing was a stretch for me, so believability wasn't an issue for me, Although the constant forced sex got a bit monotonous. He kind of gave in to easily - MOM breaking him in and introducing him to give into his new life would have been more credible to me.

I enjoyed your writing and even read most of it in two sessions, reading more than half of the 17 pages in my first reading. I enjoyed the forced sex stories but this one took me into a different world and that made it intriguing. I wil be watching out for other stories!

While it was well written, it's just not my cup of tea. 99.9% percent of males would have been out the door and down the road as soon as they asked him to suck their dicks. That's just the mindset of most males. What REALLY killed it was his mother asking for a BJ. Really? Even for a fictional story on a porn site his mother asking for a bj was over-the-top nonsense. Even if he went along with the rest of what happened, THAT would have been a bridge too far. 1 star

I see a lot of criticism in the comments and it's quite hilarious when they're criticizing a porn novel that was made just for masturbation and fantasy purposes. So to all the negative criticism and feedback on this story how bout you all fuck off and go leave some yelp reviews ya parasitic ring worms?? Dont like it then stop fucking reading it and go pump your pathetic clit sticks to something else! And that is my two cents when I was scrolling down just to see if there was a continuation but found a bunch of hate filled sexually closed minded trolls!

Would like to hear more about Stephanie and he brother as well as Molly and Ashley’s parents. Good story.

@Xarth I like the idea of this story (not new but still interesting), anyway while you're a talented writer and I am not a critic or an author (I am just a normal reader), please allow me to adding two minor points (hoping that you would read/reply and don't take it as an offence or negative comment ):

1- it is considered as a long story (19 pages), and has a lot of sex scenes, though the sex scenes are so rushed/short. I mean IMO a few sex scenes like two or three that well described are better than a ton of short ones , especially in long story like this. btw this note for all your other stories as well, please lengthen the sex scene.

2-that peeing thing is a huge turn off and I think most of readers would agree with me to that.

Thanks

Long, but well written and easy to read; and hot, really hot. Chris is a very lucky boy. I'd love to be him

Never gets old... Have read this story several times and never get tired of it.. Would love to see year 2 in school.. With him teaching and coaching a new boytoy for the house to join him.

I like this story, but it has one tag that's wrong. These girls are shemales, NOT futas. Futas have both a cock AND a pussy, these girls lack a nice breeding hole.

Gave up early. And after reading some comments, I'm glad I did. If they want to look like and act like women (i.e. submissive) just not when it's time to fuck… Out and about acting as girls but then acting like a dude in bed ➲ Guy who starts off normal only to be turned sissy and a used onihole. Yep, completely logical.

Pretty disgusting all around. There was some potential for some real connections and relationships early on, but the main character turned into little more than a living cocksleeve. He doesn't actually make any decisions, except for if he fights back or not. After the first, dubious consent, he's just a sex-slave.

I would love to see this story continued ;)

I loved this story! Thank you! I'm hoping to learn what his mom has in her basement...maybe when Tiffany comes to visit. Great stuff!

I enjoyed the storyline for the most part. I’m not into Golden Showers but the rest was great. Everyone has forgotten that this was a fantasy story NOT real life. I’ve known transgendered women from the time I was 17 that was 50+ years ago. Just last November I finally got together with a hot trans woman named Summer that I met back in 2017 when we were both homeless and at a VA run shelter. Summer was a different kind of trans women in that she was hung (9-10 inches and as big around as my wrist) I’ve never been a size queen and She was way to big for me to take. I did have an awesome time sucking her even though she didn’t cum. I’m just saying most people that commented talked like this was real life. It was not just a nice fantasy world.

Very interesting and sensually charged story. I really enjoyed reading it.

Excellent all around. Very creative story in general, with great character development - each individual was very unique and remained consistent throughout the 20 or so chapters. It even had romance - the story line with Ashley was really very sweet, in the nicest sense of the word. It took me a little bit of recovery time to adjust to the maternal incest, but of course, being futas, it was inevitable and apparently did not cause the children any psychological trauma. In fact, given the really well developed worldview you created, Molly's keeping her relationship with Chris purely maternal until he was old enough to go off to college, loving in the best sense, which would have been seriously hard at times, showed how much she loved and cared about him. Of course there were elements of the story that were harder than others to adjust to, and I imagine each reader had his or her own examples of the same, but that was fine. If readers decided to go ahead and read the story, they should have known what they were in for. And much of it was greatly entertaining. I haven't read any of the other comments yet, and I imagine - as usual - there will be negative complaints. But I have none. As mentioned, I knew what I was getting into, and in that context, purely enjoyed the story. And imagined Chris and Ashley living happily ever after. Great work Xarth.

@Anonymous: "Futa moms also don't work, biologically speaking."

Actually, the usual definition of "futanari" is a fictional cartoon character which has both a complete set of both female and male anatomy parts - a hermaphrodite - drawn to some ridiculous proportion in which both breasts and penises are huge. These characters originated in hentai and animé.

This story does not follow that convention properly but, if the intent was that these actually were futanari (and not merely "dickgirls", "shemales" or whatever slur for a pornographic caricature of a trans woman) then these are normally drawn with both male and female attributes in such a way that they might be able to give birth.

This is an amazing story initially, but by the end one only feels disappointment that Chris has become not only a very one-dimensional character but pretty much a complete moron, basically expecting others to get him through school and fund his "full ride" while he screws around and learns basically nothing in university.

Pity. One expects this to go the other way - one goes to university to become smarter, not stupider. The character becomes what, were this someone who identifies as female, could only be described as a bimbo (with the obligatory "...and thanks for lowering the glass ceiling another inch") - only with the pronouns reversed here. University and college k!ids are in that odd age gap where they're nominally not children but in many ways aren't fully adult either. On the inside, they're still growing - not just meeting new friends and building new relationships but also, hopefully, learning. They shouldn't be static characters, nor should this become a descent from promising student right down to disposable fuck toy. Piling twenty-two T-girls onto one boy and having twenty-one of them want to assume the male "top" role with him (when, by definition, trans women don't want to be male and often don't want the male role) is bizarre. I'd expect the characters to evolve and build multiple, individual relationships as couples, triads or whatever as they make new connections and meet new boys, new girls or other trans persons (who may be transitioning in either direction) as companions.

I don't agree with the commenters who suggest that adding more dimensions for specific body parts would be helpful. Quite the opposite. I read "hey everyone, look at me, I have twelve inches" in so many of these stories and my first reaction as a slut is to realise that that won't actually fit anywhere - which is no fun at all. And yes, these are trans women (or, if they're merely a pornographic caricature and not the genuine article, maybe the slur "shemale" may appear) but are not futanari as a "futa" is a fictional hermaphrodite from animé and hentai porn with both male and female genitals, usually drawn with absurd proportions.

Chris was a likeable, sympathetic character before you transformed him from a scholar into an airhead. This might have been an interesting concept if the characters had evolved in other ways, to grow intellectually, socially and emotionally instead of to merely be reduced to whatever they do in bed.

I drew the line at Cheis fucking his mom. Futa moms also don't work, biologically speaking.

I certainly should consider going back to college. Though I'm older now, I'd not hesitate to engage in as much sex as was available. Really good to see the closeness of so many families.

This is such an amazing story! I wouldn't expect anything less from you though Xarth. This and "Secrets and Surrender" are two of my top 5 erotic stories ever. Your way of writing uber-convincing casual dialog, even for odd or awkward situations, is second to none which allows for a suspension of disbelief and immersion rarely found in any genre, let alone erotica. One of the hallmarks of great erotic fiction is that you want to read it for the stories and characters, not just to get off -but don't get me wrong, they're really fucking sexy stories! As someone whose main genres are Incest and Trans (or any Gender-bent tales) this story is OMFG Hot🔥! Love your work more and more each time I read something. -Truly, Tysvm 😘

There is a serious non-con scene on page 6. You should add a note at the beginning…I’m all for role play and rough futa action, but what is written when Chris clearly says no multiple times, and Sasha smothers him so he can’t breathe, then moves so he can breathe and jams her cock down his throat, that is just rape.

This is my third reading and it is just as great as the first time I went through it. The characters have been given such varying personalities that it is one of the reasons that each reading is like visiting old friends. The details throughout the story is constant and the conversations are totally believable which is another reason I keep coming back to enjoy it. Thanks as always for this wonderful story.

Great story! Took me a couple of sittings to finish, but I do enjoy the time you spent building the personalities and relationships in and out of Futa House. While I wasn't sure about the incestuous aspects, it became clear that in this world, "conventional" propriety was out the window. Once I got past that it was a great read. It's obvious that the protagonist is well loved by all the girls, and not Just a fuck toy. Thanks for sharing!

I loved this story. The characters are great. It is long, but anyone who looks at that up front, reads, then complains about it is just inconsiderate. And to comment on some opinions about the girls not being real futas, so sorry but characters are what the author makes them. I gave this five stars and it is by far the most complex story I’ve read here. I don’t think “readers” realize just what it takes to write a story that long. You’re my favorite author here by far and this is your best I’ve read yet. Now I have to go and read more from you. I’m so worked up.

reminded me soo much of when I lived with a bunch of T's (all types. Crossdressers and transsexuals'). Had one gurl who will always be the one, but I was shared. I was the boytoy. I did experience getting pissed on and up my ass and fisted. Also experienced close and intimate sex. This just brought back great emotions. Too bad that was 20 plus years ago. Too many of the gurls are not with us anymore.

Enjoyed this so much. Thank you.

I really enjoyed it turned me on so much you should do another one on the same lines

I had to read this story again,as it turned me on so much last time. I wish this was reality. I would so love to be on giving end and not the receiving for once ;)

The fact that basically every character only sees Chris as basically an object was kinda messed up to read. I kept expecting someone to treat him like a person but nit even his mom or councilor did. As the story continued Chris is so far gone even he doesn't see himself as more than an object to be used and doesn't want to be.

The story started good but once the house fills up the story drastically turns becoming how to break a person down so far they don't do anything else but exist to be used and tossed to the side.

Great story I couldnt stop reading... and cumming hahaha

I loved this story; I would love to be a "Futa" boy toy.

can you make more under the desk deepthroat like the one in pade 17?

Oh dear, as has been said, glossing over rape and dehumanisation is pretty gross. Not good at all.

“Natalie appeared suitably abashed, but also satisfied and not quite as repentant as Chris might have liked. "Sorry," she said. "I lost control a little toward the end."” This part alone is why i’m not gonna read the rest of the story. She just raped him and you glossed over it like it was nothing. Disgusting

It was amazing. I could not wait to get some privacy and read how the story developed. I imagined myself as Chris and wish to get so many girls like Natalie and Sasha.

Awesome. Not my usual thing, but I must admit I really enjoyed it. Well written. Thanks for sharing. 5*

I wish I fall for futa its better then marrying a bitch who always cares about cock side and gold diggers and who yea lies about being straight and only wants a baby since lesbian bitch can't mate with them

I lost count of how many times i came reading this story :)

This was quite the interesting story. There were bits that i really liked and some that I didnt. I really didn't like the fact that his mom dropped him into all of it while literally telling him nothing at all. I thought that was very un-motherly and really rude actually. Also didn't like that none of the girls in the house would ever accept 'no' or 'not right now'. It seemed like Chris was physically incapable of pooting his foot down. The action was good, pretty descriptive in general. It was a tad bit long, but worth the read.

Awesome story concept, quite likely the best in this category, definitely better than most! Thank you for sharing that wonderful mind of yours,.. so when is the sequel? What happens next? Until then, be good to yourself and your fellow humans (well, mostly just the good ones),.. ;-) TTFN

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Great writing. So uninhibited in lust. The power of the female, or futa. Yes I know Nobody in Particular comics and you did a great job bringing to life the lust in those futa toons! I hope you do more similar and will be checking back. Thank you.

This is the second time I have read this story. Had to put my thinking cap on to try to write a review.

First all 5 ++++ stars. One of the best stories on Literotica, regardless of the category. You have one really crazy mind, please keep writing more.

Best story in this genre

Congratulations on writing a fantastic character-driven story. Good job.

this story is incredibly hot and awesome, ignore brain-dead morons like radomir.

I just wish there was more sex with Natalie and a some more playful banter

I don't understand the people commenting of wanting pussies. But then I like stories with pre-op trans women topping guys. Does the presence of a pussy makes it sound less gay or what is the deal?

Nice story ;)

Great story; wish you had more futa/male stories, especially with sis/bro considering that's your main focus.

I don't understand.

In general, Futa is a hermaphrodite. It's more like the campus is not a futa girl, but a gay guy with systems. They don't need Cris. Fuck his ass? Don't they have their own? Smooth his dick? They don't have their own? Why don't they grow Kris's tits? Dumbass.

I wish they were real futa with cunts (pussies) and they tried to rub Kris for him to fuck them because other real guys don't know about their condition. This would be a small point. And so just a bad fantasy.

And how is your mother? Is she really a tato? Or in general they are relatives?

Not at all similar to the stories of the author.

This is probably just a simple attempt to get rid of it. But why such a long?

Total disappointment

Too rape-y

That was amazing

Great story..Molly and Dia need a cross country trip and bang their way across the US

Great story! Would love to see a sequel with summer activities and maybe Chris in a porno with Dia.

Could we get a prequel featuring the twins brother?

I loved the story, read the entire story twice over the weekend. One thing confused me though, this was a story about Futas but not one time was anywhere mentioned about the Futa pussy, this story was more about dickgirls than Futas. I think if I had edited this story, which I think was very good, I would have had the author put some Futa pussy penetration scenes with Chris to bring out the fact that Futa have both a cock and a pussy.

This is my third read of this story and over the years I still find it to be a great read that is emotionally fulfilling on multiple levels. There are only a couple of stories that manage that and over the years I have come to realize how much I deeply appreciate being able to immerse myself into something that has been authored by someone so talented. Thanks again for this wonderful story.

J.D.

Was a good read but I feel it should have been broken down to separate chapters.

Excellent concept and idea for story, only issue is are these Futa or TS? As we all know one has a vagina, and the other does not.. would of been far more interesting if the story was true Futa. Three hole are better than one.

very good story 5 stars

Most Futa stories goes Futa meets meets boy, shoves cock into boys mouth, flips boys over and shoves cock up ass, turns boy into wimpering sissy they lived happily ever after.

I liked the build up and the character build up. Even though a little manipulative they were also caring. As the story went on you started to create great dialog between Chris and all the girls, which kind of wielded done to me horny, suck, fuck. Except with Natalie, Sasha and then Ashley.

I loved how had Natalie help him out when things got out of hand. I also love how you brought Ashley in to love him without taking him over.

A couple of things that is always written in (futa, shemale, TS) stories are in the beginning a male can be masculine and still suck and get ass fucked by cock but by the end the men are wearing panties if not women clothes al together and change their name to a female name, IE Chris to Chrissy. Also the Boytoy only self identity is being a BoyToy, no longer a human being just a fuck toy.

I would like to see something like this: 3 or 4 guys beat the hell out of Chris because he refused to suck them off or allow them to fuck him. His body is for the girls he cares about the Futa. Chris comes back to the Futa House bandaged up, Natalie explains to the girls that he's not allow any physical exercise from 10 days to 2 weeks.

As Ashely brings his mother and Ms. Carlyle the girls are mad saying they are going to find the guys who hurt their boytoy others saying fucktoy cumdump so on, Ms. Carlyle said she will find and expel them for hurting her little toy.

Ashley screams at the top of her lungs for them to shut up and stop. Everyone stops in their tracks and looks so surprised. Nat asks dont you want to get them for what they did. Ashely says yes but what them different they you all, she pauses and says WE all.

Even now all you see is you cant get off in him. Not one of you even bothered saying his name, Chris. None of you see him as nothing more then just something to get you off. So what makes you any better.

Ashely looks a Nat and Sasha ands asks them what kind of movies does he likes. what anyone here knows what kind of music or anything but huis mouth and ass.

Ashely turns to Ms. Carlyle tells she has a great reputation for being strict but fair teacher, who spends time helping the students with any help. Ashley asks MS. Carlyle what has she done for Chris except stick her dick in him. does she think if he left the university can he make a life for himself. Ms. Carlyle stummers IIII.... am not really sure looking down in shame.

Ashley looks at Ms. Mac Kenzie already seeing her head held low in shame, Ashely calls her name, she looks up at Ashely and says you dont have to say anything I know my shame, I hope I can make it up to him. Ashley tells Chris's mom when he is able to leave take him away. No one objects.

Over the next 2 weeks all the girls spend hours taking turns taking care of Chris.

When the time comes for his mother to take him home he smiles and says no I am home, with girls who care.

Natalie tells him the girls are in need of him to take care of them. He smiles and tell Natalie to line them up at his door.

OK I got carried away.

I did enjoy it THank you

First off, I *love* this story, both for the story in and of itself and for your writing style.

Now, there is one (or rather four) things I've long been wondering. In your mind, dear Xarth, what are your fine Futa fatales packing? Specifically... on average... what are the girls packing? And let's not forget about our three adult Futas - how do they measure up to the girls?

I've re-read this a number of times over the years. Y'know, it would be interesting/funny, to flash forward a few years past college to see what shenanigans he's gotten up to.

Thanks so much for sharing your delicious imagination with us.

Loved it. Keep up the great writing.

Stopped after 6, just as another commenter here. Took first 5 before any ass fucking, then the equivalent situation repeating for 13 more - almost ad nauseum. Little too much of a good thing

... to get into this story . I love futa stories , liked most of the characters , and the story telling was grade A+ . I was hoping that , at some point , " Chrissy " would grow a spine . Page 14 was as far as my stomach could go . After Mommy took her turn , I was just repulsed . Now , I am forced to wonder , of the 745 people who favorites this story , who would feel the same , if it were a 19 page story , of a father sending his daughter into his former school , and frat house , to be passed around , and repeatedly raped , just so he could bring her home , to have his turn .

I enjoyed the story (Different) & well written. I really wanted to give you a five star rating, However, your ending only left him in a.cocooned bliss! With human no value beyond the satisfaction of others, in other words you deprived of his dignity! Was that your intention?

Thanks again..

Pity its not real

XARTH, this is a very well written story - Both because it is innovative, interesting, well written & edited (amazingly for Literotica, cliche free, no or very few grammatical or spelling errors.) I am not normally a Futa on Male affectionado but this actually caught my interest. I only dislike/hate two things - "sissification" and "male on male"

Now Chris exhibited no homosexual leanings. It seems that 90% of all Futanari Canon is that though there is a penis (sometimes with or without, testicles &/or a vagina!) That Futa are without a doubt still FEMININE. So Chris, though he got to enjoy "girlcock" never became Gay, as he still loves female anal, breasts and (unknown) I presume he would still like a vagina?) So I HATED the sissification of Chris and it jarred me because all of the futa appeared to prefer "Boybum" by a large margin over female anything! Please let Chris become a "Man" who enjoys Futas & Women and not just a Fucked Up Little Bitch who wears woman's clothes because he will age and it won't be that long until he is a "Used up, Loose Old Guy who isn't in demand any more. So he has no future once he is no longer the cute perky young tight kid with the firm soft buns etc... too sad to even think about!

I really liked the developing relationship between Chris and Ashley, it feels right. and I'd like to think that Natalie and Sascha would play a part in Chris's future too. A Futa harem (flexible for Sascha and a little less for Natalie) Maybe after college they ALL live together? Chris's Mom might find a Futa partner (with a truly Epic Girlcock? Molly falls head over heels, in LUST)

Maybe Futa House: The Next Generation. Chris becomes mentor to one or two new young guys and teacher them how to cope/endure & possibly enjoy their time in Futa House? (Chris could "Graduate" and become the Permanent Liaison/ recruiter for the College, between new "boys" and The Futa Community. He doesn't go gay but still enjoys some butt sex despite having a "Wife" Ashley and two close Companions, both Natalie (especially because she is wise, loving, caring, yet still has that Wild Futa side) and Sascha? It really seems to me that Chris and Natalie (& to a certain extent Sascha) have bonded and built the foundation for a long term relationship. She is very benevolently lovingly Dominant in Futa House.

Following the Futa Canon, Futa's have VAGINA'S as Chris's Mom Molly "gave Birth" to Chris somehow - this is the Deepest dark secret of Chris's existence. Thank you for writing this entertaining story. I actually enjoyed it a lot. It is one of my THREE top Futa Stories. All are equally good in my opinion.

Cheers

Luke.

Never actually finished this story before I always nut by around page 6.. Very good story just wish I had the endurance and willpower to not cum before the ending. It usually takes me a long time to finish myself off but this story really get me going.

The anon who pointed out the futanari/hermaphrodite aspect is just nit-picking because this is storyland where whatever you want goes. If it suits this story for the futas to only have cocks and no pussies then so be it - makes a change anyway.

A real saga but while I'll give it 5 stars for quality of grammar and lack of errors (yeah, there were some, but not many) I was nevertheless disappointed that the story didn't branch out into sideline adventures because after everyone had had a go at Chris's ass (thank you Xarth - I'll claim my percentage for using my name without my permission later) it really became just one round of ass-fucking after another with little variation.

Sure, the descriptions were good; the action was non-stop and the conversation was fine but the story lacked a certain degree of something extra to captivate us. I fondly expected that some visiting boy would take his turn at Chris's asshole just as I anticipated that the occasional dad would, but it never happened, more's the pity.

Regardless, a story that I enjoyed and that I'm glad I read - entirely, even though it took me three long sessions.

How many people on here don't know that a futanari is a hermaphrodite, therefore has both male And female genitals. Not just a chick with a dick.

Wonderful Freshman year story, now how about a Senior year and Graduation tale. And what about the fates of our sexy Sasha and the incredible Natalie? A few paragraphs, or a dozen chapters, or so, would be most appreciated. It has been a couple of years now, please consider doing a sequel to this favorite story of mine that your creative talent produced,.. and for all your hard work, thank you!

Holy Gods above and Below, that was EPIC.

the story was way too long. It started to get boring by page 6. It was interesting when his mother became a sex partner but even that became boring after several pages. You needed to focus on fewer subjects and fuck sessions. However, having said this, I read the entire story over several weeks and was amused. Less is more with detail.

I would love to read about a younger version of Chris's mom. Maybe a little of college, a few years later when she starts to fuck the neighbors lol. And maybe after Chris comes home and the neighbors drop by! Just for fun .LOL

Read half of this story, got sick of it when he starts getting training from mom’s friend. I agree with other comments below. Mc was forced/dropped into this position, and at most was inconvenienced by it. No real emotions from him other than slight sarcasm or annoyance at any time in what I read. While the grammar of the writing was good, this really didn’t go anywhere. Not enough interesting stuff to warrant 19 pages. 2*

Loved the story. Just one criticism is that the futas only had a cock. A true futa has both cock and pussy. I would think that Chris would've had the pleasure to fuck some futa pussy since futas have both. Since it wasn't the case,I think the story title and the name of the sorority was very misleading. The reality is that the futas were really just shemales in the story. Nothing against it at all. I gave it five stars. Looking forward to read more of your work.

But nevertheless one amazing story.

I'd give it 10 Stars if I could !

Rapier

I'm not really into everything in this story, and some aspects made me a little uncomfortable, but I'd read some of your other (sibcest) stuff and it was really well-written, so I knew this wouldn't be a waste of my time. Sure enough, the humor and character dynamics were enough to keep me reading on their own. This is really impressive for what I'm sure must have been a bit outside your comfort zone!

I love this story. Extremely lengthy, comprehensively detailed and overall, amazing. It's realistic and covers everything I would have thought of. I often think of something that Chris would have been thinking, only to find it mentioned the following sentence. That's something few stories do. Additionally, this story is long. as. hell. Thank you so much for not slowly releasing 5 chapters which cover nothing and leave me unsatisfied.

This story is worth 3 fap sessions minimum (while slowly reading through it). I love the gentle and loving aspect of this story, so much. Others are more dominating and toxic, mean... This one has a little of that, but it's always fueled by lust, not "I'm betting than you, suck my cock, faggot." domination that I hate and am turned off by.

The only thing I'm annoyed by is a lack of measurements; no one has a 7 inch cock, a 9 inch cock, or a 12 inch monster. Everyone has a 'cock' (Chris or Ashley) or a 'big cock' (Ashley, Natalie, Sasha) or a 'massive cock' (Molly, Dia or Miss Carlyle); everything's relative, and of course in the futanari world, scaled differently. I suppose that's a good way of making sure you don't have to keep track of things, but it would be nice to have a comparison to what's going on, a visualization. Please integrate this into your writing if possible.

Also, I feel like the "Chris's cock is small compared to everyone else." kind of comments should either be removed, or added more. It feels like they're (very) lightly sprinkled around, not making their presence known. I like them, personally; I kind of like cuckold and cock comparison, I wish there were more stories like that. Just feels like somethings 'off' with them. Add more, I guess.

Not sure who the faggot below is, saying that this story is about 'Domination' when it clearly is not. It's sprinkled throughout, futadom, but it's definitely not a primary or even secondary category to a story like this. Fuck off, stop ruining a story with your inane shit. This is gentle futa, the best kind, not your freaky toxic futadom shit.

I have read a lot of these type of stories, but I have never heard of so much abuse in any of them!!!! You need to go to another site here and write about DOMINATION, because this is all that this story is about!!!!

Honestly I usually try to offer some kind of constructive criticism but this story was hands down and up and down the best I have read on literotica. I was skeptical with it being 19 pages but I legit could not put it down or stop playing with myself. 10/10 please write more.