All Comments on 'Futan-Aria'

Great story, wish I could be the protagonist. I want some of that futanari loving.

that was simply amazing whens the next chapter also improve your grammer

This is not only loaded with spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors, but is also lacks a sensible plot. I understand that it’s fantisy, but the reference to experimental sex in college was a weak desperate attempt to rope in the reader. Furthermore, you missed a potentially amazing ending where the guy wakes up on the plane and discovers that his dream was a primer or coaching to become a real-time bottom for the woman sitting next to him.

This was disappointing, but you can do better. Keep writing, but read at least two hours for every hour you write. Finally, get an editor. There are sources that are on this site to help. Use them.

Could've used a lot more description of the sex, too rushed