All Comments on 'Futanari Prison - Introduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Can't wait!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too excessive

Seems to be the same everywhere. Always excessive and far beyond the last person. An unspoken challenge perhaps. Thanks anyway!

FutaLover_79FutaLover_79over 4 years ago
Size

Sizes are way too cartoonish for my liking. I will never understand why people think this is hot. Tone down the sizes and I'll continue reading this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

I think people need to stop complaining about futanari sizes. The whole point is that it's unrealistic. Like, if I wanted 'realistic', I'd read the other 95% of this website that's a man dominating a woman that's madly in love with him despite the fact that he's either an average shlub or an unlikeable asshole.

As for this story, I enjoyed it, I feel, like you could have lingered a bit more on the action, it felt like half of it was just describing the bodies of the characters. I understand it's an introduction, but some more time to ease into the world and your story would do things some wonders. For example, if futanari cumming is regulated, how much of the world's population is women with cocks? What was Kasey's life like before? Are all police guards filled with exposition, or just that one? XD

I love seeing excess writers enter the scene, we're few and far between compared to the vanilla "man fucks woman" power fantasy I see *everywhere* so kudos on your story and I'm excited to see than just the first chapter.

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