All Comments on 'Futareich Ch. 03'

Hot but do futa have a vagina? If women only give birth to futa, then who gives birth to women?

More please!

I hated the ending of this one. As each seems to get sweeter and sweeter for the male-futa partners, almost a loving relationship, but the women and girls to be treated like The Handmaid's Tale is garbage in my book.

please keep writing your amazing stories, and keep treating the female characters like you do!

I never thought I would see more of this! Please, continue working on it!

Seriously ... you’re back! Thanks for continuing the story. I hope you’ve got more to add in the future. I enjoy your work and look forward to anything else you have in the works!

Glad you are back. A very good story, a kinda interesting world, keep going, please. Please, add more futa on female scenes. I understand that sex with females in that world must be assosiated with some men's humiliation but it could be good for the story to make some exceptions for that rule. I would also request a more proper corruption description of Dylan's relatives. Make a scene in a next story or release "extra scenes" or make them create a special video for Dylan. I do not know but ending has a big unused potential.

Glad to see you back Narg!

Best one yet! I hope you make more of them and am happy to see you return! :D

Wonderful descriptions!

This shit is hot. That is all.

Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! This was splendidly written! The futa prototyping proportions (flaccid hanging to knee level?) Are just ridiculous but everything else is perfect!

Will you ever eventually go back to making non-cuckold stories?

Kind of a weird comment. The last story I posted before this one was God Emperor 3, which had no cuckolding. Also Pet elf 2 had cuckolding in it, and that was one of the earliest I ever posted. What do you mean by "go back" to non cuckold stories?

Great story. Can't wait to read more.

Ok, I just want them to cross the Atlantic and walk across the Himalayas to Siberia and beyond. Just spread that crazy reing and make everyone happy

I agree with the others. Glad you are back and still working an new Material Narg. I am a huge Fan of your God Emperor Story but i also enjoyed the other reads as well. So my hope is to read more of you in the future. Keep on posting that quality.

A great story, although there are some logical issues in the world of the story. However, the world in story is very well-developed. I really like that atmosphere of despair in the story. I can try to help with the story development with and without shifting from the original fetish. Anyway, hope for more action in future and appearing of futas from all ethnicities

Also can I write some spin-offs, based on your series? It's unlikely to happen, but still would like to ask

Sure. Spin away!

Came here to praise this story and beg you for more chapters. Fucking hot stuff.

Hope you continue this story, it's so good

Natzis alive and well in Literotica. Anyway to provide a negative score?

I really hope the author decides to do one or two future chapters with a bit more of a happy ending as well.

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While the darker endings and tone to these chapters fit very well in the world the author has created, I can't help but feel like the bad endings are getting a bit too predictable at this point. Mixing it up a bit, imho, would keep readers in better suspencion while also avoiding the pit fall of repetition.

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Regardless, the sex scenes were hot, the deeper insight into Dylans psyche was amazing (tho his downfall was a tad rushed and most of that build up was kinda thrown away in the end).