All Comments on 'Future Porn'

Where is the incest??

Not incest.

maybe setting up for the father or brothers to have sex with her or mom after the video?

Some mother's would feel the most comfortable doing a porno if their son was fucking them.

promising premise completely wasted.

there’s a whole family fantasizing about their sister/daughter and watching her porn... how does it not fit the “taboo” category?

Not enough to get into characters. Begs for more chapters.

This shows promise but it was too short. I hope you continue with the idea because your writing is pretty good :)

I was disappointed in the lack of backstory ... what made the future become the way it did for this story?

I like this concept with porn being mandatory and very open. I prefer if you (or someone else) would expand on the idea with experiences of other women who cater different fetishes (mature, bbw, busty, etc)