All Comments on 'Gabriela's Enslavement Ch. 02'

by ZZchromosome

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AviciaAviciaover 1 year ago

I love this story

NnnelsonNnnelsonover 1 year ago

Really enjoyed this chapter, especially the description of the seedy underbelly of the legal slave trade.

msspnnrmsspnnrover 1 year ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Looking forward to the author injecting some sex into the story. How about Jimmy busting open that ginger slaves ass right in front of the girls with a couple of handprints left on her ass from a few well placed spanks.

MrSmith27MrSmith27over 1 year ago

An entertaining chapter. The girls field trip through the legal slavery system exposes how the vast majority of slaves are treated in this world. I am looking forward to the girls arrival at White Brier to see how that consort school operates.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Outstanding and gripping. Hurry with the next several chapters.

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 year ago
Outstanding Details and Emotions

Your story telling and drama and the details of the emotions and feelings is top shelf entertainment. Such a great slave story. Great characters and draw you into their lives. So 5 stars across the board. Thanks for you time to develop such a fun story. Rock it on for these young ladies. Cheers

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I'm still writing, and none of my stories have been abandoned. I have a difficult home life and it makes it hard for me to listen to my artistic side.

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