All Comments on 'Game Gone Wrong'

Well done!

5*

Tc

Nice story. I don't think I would have done the same things as the MC, but it seemed to work for him. I noticed that Jennie never told him she loves him back.

I hope she remembers who the good guy is. A pity the goon who inpregnated her and told the world about it, didnt get a visit from her father to even the score. Maybe also a visit to the slimeball blackmailer one dark night as well. Then let the world know there there is an avenger in town. Bullies only understand strong pain in whatever form they deserve.

Excellent story. I enjoyed it

5stars

Nice story, an enjoyable read.

Ahhh, young love!

I enjoyed the read.

"nipple getting hander"

I am astounded.

N and R are not even close to each other on the key board