All Comments on 'Game Night'

Love this

The good way it can work

Anytime an author writes something like "engaged to a judgemental bitch," "megabitch" and "controlling turbobitch," you know that story is by a loser espousing delusional stupidities. I still read the story and my initial assessment was unfortunately correct. I suppose author was writing about himself except no decent woman would ever consider having someone like him father her children.

A neat way to accomplish ones goal. A "berth", a nice nautical term.

In fact, you're two cuckolds sharing a wife.

Is that it?

Too good not to be better! So many typos (I hope they were typos; e.g., ot instead of to) I had to force myself to keep reading. Please, please, please, read your stories out loud, including the punctuation, before posting them, even if you have someone proofread them.

Stupid as a man prefers not to have a personal life with his own family!

The correct word is sterile not infertile.

Very good story.

I really love the story but not all the little writing errors. Get a good proofreader for your next story.

Written by a nerd?

Dream on stud. Three stars.

Entertaining and light. Well done.

Any time a commenter disavows the existence of bitches of extreme caliber, you know they are either a bitch themselves or a loser who got married to a bitch and hates himself for being unable to escape from his personal Hell. Yes, @someoneother, I'm looking at you...

A Dune fan?

Thanks for sharing your story, not bad but not great.

@someoneother, bro your stories are 15k words of your self insert eating another man's cum out of exactly that kind of woman, because you ignored all the red flags and married her instead of having some self respect.

@typobro ah dammit you're right, totally missed them. I'll get round to an edit, hope you still enjoyed it!

Ridiculous premise. She's be divorced and raising the kid by herself.

This story has been done a lot of times - the best can be found (maybe) on ASST as "The Gravid Contract" by DrSpin from around 1999/2000. I humbly suggest that the author and others who favored this piece read that one

The old cuck is sterile so whorewife has to get something else to knock her up story.

Nice try but nah.

keep writing

What ever works and everyone is okay with it. Interesting read! 4*

I found myself in the same situation. My brother was in Afghanistan and lost his testicles when an IED exploded under his APC. when he returned his wife, Vi, was having a hard time because she was looking forward to having a family with him. About six months after he returned, he showed up outside of my apartment with a six pack and worried look. He came in and proceeded to tell me the details of his injury and how he would never be able to father children. I felt so bad as this big military man was close to tears. Then he asked if I would help them. They said they wanted someone with as close to his DNA as possible. That way their families medical history would still be true and that the babies would look just like his. I have fathered three kids so far. To be honest, Vi isn't the nicest person in the world, but damn is she hot. Just looking at her and knowing I get to fuck that is great.

Well done. Not an easy story to make sound possible or real.

Interesting that you made him a Chubby fucker. Once the kids are grown and gone so will be Ben. What the fuck does she need with a useless cuck that old and fat getting in between her and her fuck toy? And Ben is probably dumb and docile enough to go along with it. Hell, by then he'll probably be sucking cock anyway, just to get some sort of novelty and pleasure from sex. He sure as hell won't be getting in from the Dancing Hippo. She'll be saving all her dances for the Father of her children.

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God, what disgusting losers. Let's hope the kids have more intelligence, and more self respect.

I do t know why more people don’t do this .IVF costs a fortune

Fun story.

Literotica definitely needs at least up/down vote and Author deletion of drivel from Anonymous cowards.

Some of the stupid commenters do not understand, or even comprehend the difference between love and sex.

Great story of a happy family.

too good 5 stars