by vanalas
This is perfection. Has all the best elements of bad drama dialled up to 11:
Bland, indistinct, characters whose only personality traits are being rich, hot and popular
A sexy wicked stepmother who steals every scene by being the only person with a clear motivation
A clichéd tragic backstory to make the worst character more likeable, which actually raises more questions about their lack of depth
A long-distance boyfriend who is guaranteed to turn up unexpectedly at the worst possible moment
A random marriage proposal between two characters who don't even know each other, seemingly on a whim, but happens to kick off the whole plot.
Just fantastic stuff. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. Maybe Smith was Gossip Girl all along!
Let me first apologise for late comenting my senior.....i was at work and on coming back i had some research on google so i failed to catch the real time of the submission...so am truly sorry my king.......The first impression i got after reading Eric's part was" he z the coolest guy on the universty"Yessss.....that beauty,those curves,that slow motion freaky walk jeez my dears the story has the best introduction ever....just first focus on how Riya and Smith's characters commenced.. .man i thought the MAN or rather the bull as Van called Chris in the "Great Miguelogy" is Smith but hey....am coming to that...well,Eric is yet the second main beauty to have such an attitude in all characters...yes i agree
Trust me when i say he is the second...if you guys remember the most dangerous yet the fierce(st) freak called of the "Great miguelogy" named Angelo..hahaha then u know what am saying...that guy was the best at this newly Eric Attitude,gosh Miguel cud even kill u if u dare to pull such low stunts....thats what makes Eric the second if u have read page,3 well.Man he was all cool at the start but at the end of this brilliant premeire,he was The other side of Travis.....hahaha i miss those freak....well back here..Eric according to what i see he will be the most difficult character just like my Aiden in the "UNBROKEN era"
Guys...allow me to abbreviate "Game of love" as GOL...OK now here i continue....so far am on the Eric side only for never have i ever left the lead roles' sides and trust me though we have That Giada mum,my enemy is now Trevor...fuck yeah i dont trust him..he can rot in hell for all i care and i reaaallllyyy love challenges thats why am gonna say...though i know we have been through hit series and Vana-plots just with each making it to the top and dethroning the other...GOL will be so different in away that we have playboys and commitment😁😁😁😁😁just see Henry,Rita and Scott meaning the conflicts are 100% inclusive and dont forget. . ....
.....we are at the university...GOL is the,first of its kind
I have instantly loved Smith with (his cock) and baby Riya....so adorable good friends esp that pool and and party potrays...man their conversations are great and yes i dont like Tony hahaha😆😆😆😆i thought he was gonna be the MAIN MAN'S Other friend due to that introductory part of him but Henry made it so......the GOL is on
In all premiers i always long to see how the bae and the boo are introduced and yes u can never be disappointed by Vanastories and that is Him....man the fascinating introduction of our booboo Sergio made me figure out how his d***k might be like and yeah call me crazy but I like what Van brings as in a category for he makes it work....and i accept i love (playboys) hahaha so am love with this jerk Sergio and Yes.......am ready to team up with ERIC to fight him....
I think i like Henry so much coz he wants to quit that casanov thing,man yap i agree he sucked at the proposal but Eric was more harsh...i pitied the guy man..eeh that was bad and ....i just love Steve he z cool but yap my man has all the Credit...Sergio nice name....SERIC hehehehe
Lets keep it up my boos though i cant forget how Henry has made Sergio swear to make my Eric accept his proposal and also fuck him....OK let us see hahaha so they wanna play us???? And there arises the title..GOL...OK i see it now ....hahaha there is a way Henry was slapped that got me thinking the guy even went into hypnosis for afew seconds....hahaha thats my bitch Eric,let us show them the exact opposite of Praveen...though be merciful please
Hard by rihanna
Marry me by Jason derulo
Megatron by Nicki minaj
Irreplaceable by Beyonce
Blank space by Taylor swift
Love on the brain by my girl rihanna....and the welcoming song of the series "he,wasn't man enough"by Toni braxton
.....GOL/SERIC...WE welcome u to vanaland
I'm all in for going on another journey with Eric.i know It's only the first chapter but I can already feel the adrenaline rush. I can't wait to see what Eric has in store for us. I'm so excited😁. I'm ready to experience the happiness, sadness, drama and of course the love&passion that only you can deliver van.