by flashgordon562006
I love the idea, but more sex detail would be nice, and flush out the characters more.
The last dare, each guy was in turn supposed to fuck Lisa and cum inside her. But each guy put on a condom to fuck her. So how were they to cum inside her while wearing a condom. While reading this last dare I was thinking that the was going to end up with cum dripping out of her pussy, but instead the guys cum in the condom and not actually inside her. What a huge dissappointed of an ending. At least it was for me. Also you need some editing as the 2nd and 3rd dare, both women had to remove their tops twice. So how did that work? Did they put their tops back on after the 2nd dare?
I agree with you about the ending. However, if I put that in some readers would have said that wasn't safe sex and then I would take a hit. Either way, I was going to be chastised