All Comments on 'Gamer Gaped'

Part 2 please

Oh, I so badly want to be the nerd in this story! Begging Mommy to put me in the window dressed in a short pink skirt and halter top. In my pretty pink women's crotchless pantyhose with black ankle cuff pumps padlocked around my ankles. So the whole world can watch me make cummies in my cage hands free shaking in ecstasy. While I beg for more. And ask Mommy for a tramp stamp tattoo. Mommy's Cock Sleeve Cum Dumpster. Please make a deposit! With arrows pointing to my girly shaved sissy pussy! I would be thrilled to accept my new life as Mommy Bitch Breakers sex toy.

Fuck this was hot

Thank you for your unexpected and unusual comment. It's fascinating; also seeing people appreciate the story is good motivation. "Mommy Bitch-Breaker" is not a nice lady at all, but each to their own!

I liked the story. However, there are serious editing issues that keep pulling me out of the flow because I have to mentally correct them. I'm weird, I know it. This could be a much better story with simple grammar and spelling corrections. Just my .02. Please keep writing. You definitely have talent.