by SynSlave
Would love to see a second part telling the brother and sister side of the evening.
It was great and a good read. I would have liked to have been able to read Simons and Victorias shenanigans over the Simon and Ashley one but, I still enjoyed it.
Novella would be the best and many more holliday opportunities for the multitudes of combos. Brought me many years back since reality usually copies fantasy and how such a quintet can live happily ever after, (unless someone has to go against his/her will).
Based on feedback so far I think I'll expand it. Victoria and her brother was going to be the focus of chapter two. I hadn't considered a novella but based on feedback I may explore the idea. Thanks again and please keep commenting; I'll use the feedback from the readers to decide how I'll proceed/continue.
This was really amazing. One of the best stories ever. Please keep up the incredible work.
Because of the feedback I'm half way through a follow up. And since it's what people asked for, there will be more focus on Victoria and her brother. I have a rough idea for a third part as well. But if I keep getting feedback like this I might have to think of another project with the same characters/premise or continuing this one. Other projects are eating up time but I'm not shelving this one, based solely on feedback.
Absolutely amazing! I loved this story and really enjoyed the dynamics of the group. The girls especially played off really well against one another. Can't wait for another part or a new story!