by johnleslie3
All of that to fix a flat tire? What ultra universe do you live in? And double anal penetration? Get real. 1*
I can honestly say that I’ve never read anything quite like this, even though I skipped most of this what I did read was without a doubt pure fantasy. Best of luck with your writing.
Tess (uk)
some of the nasty gay parts like the double anal and cum licking part made me lose my boner. Otherwise decent story
Gape and drip? The authors on this site are more interesting in describing sex in the grossest possible way.
Reads like a how to manual. Nothing dynamic or sexy when it’s described in this way, “and then they took a screwdriver and found the screw, it was a tiny screw. Each of them had their own thick screwdrivers, Bob’s was really long. He went at the screw blindly, striking the tiny screw over and over twisting it left, then right,”