by bobsamade
You still have fans my friend.
As much fun as John's had just bouncing around. The foreshadowing was good to see. Keep up the good work!
...just to see if you've got anything new; and I'm glad I didn't miss this nice piece of work. I look forward to the next chapter.
I liked this chapter, but I thought the beginning was a bit too reminiscent of Succubus Summoning 108. I know that's the chapter that inspired this series (and that's why I like it!), but don't be afraid to branch out a bit more!
I'm so glad to see you back.
You've picked out my favourite scene from Succubus Summoning to develop, and I'm so glad to see how it turns out for him.
I'd love to see more.