All Comments on 'Garden of Hellish Delights Ch. 10'

by bobsamade

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mjm202036mjm202036about 13 years ago
Great ending, but...

...I hate to see the end of this fantastic story. I look forward to your future works.

skelligrockskelligrockabout 13 years ago

Well that was an unexpected ending. A rather smart bit of horror writing. It reminded me of some of the old "Hellblazer" comics with John Constantine.

A shame to leave the garden, but looking forward to the next story.

manyeyedhydramanyeyedhydraabout 13 years ago

An interesting twist to the ending. You should have let the lilim play with him a bit more ;).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wonderful

I keep coming back to this story again and again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Very enjoyable read....I love the way you tied everything together in the end...very talented my friend😊

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
author

Are you manyeyedhydra by chance? Your writing style and the names of the succubi in your other stories are the same as his, like Nyte and Nurse Honey.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The innocent victim gets fucked over and dies. I am really tired of stories like this. I wish there is a tag to let people know that the story has a crap ending that's twisted into a bad ending.

Another shitty ending of another twisted story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brah that ended super dark

Fun read but dam this ones going to haunt me for a while.. Dam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

We never got a ffm threesome with Tara and Aura 😭

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