by bobsamade
...I hate to see the end of this fantastic story. I look forward to your future works.
Well that was an unexpected ending. A rather smart bit of horror writing. It reminded me of some of the old "Hellblazer" comics with John Constantine.
A shame to leave the garden, but looking forward to the next story.
An interesting twist to the ending. You should have let the lilim play with him a bit more ;).
Very enjoyable read....I love the way you tied everything together in the end...very talented my friend😊
Are you manyeyedhydra by chance? Your writing style and the names of the succubi in your other stories are the same as his, like Nyte and Nurse Honey.
The innocent victim gets fucked over and dies. I am really tired of stories like this. I wish there is a tag to let people know that the story has a crap ending that's twisted into a bad ending.
Another shitty ending of another twisted story.
Brah that ended super dark
Fun read but dam this ones going to haunt me for a while.. Dam