All Comments on 'Garden Shelter'

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dotcom2099dotcom2099almost 3 years ago
My opinion

As a fan of your writing, I don't think this is one of your best!!

Sorry

ArtieMax2ArtieMax2over 2 years ago

No proof that is the right genre, probably not. Interesting treatment but elaborating on the Bondage aspect would have been interesting.

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 2 years ago

Not great and a lot of typos but very charming. Do they still serve tea at the constabulary? Long live the king!

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

***Nice storytelling. Thanks for sharing

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Can I now change bio? oggbashan was diagnosed as terminally ill and expected to be dead by June 2018. As you can see. I am still here. . As long as I can I will continue writing and posting on Literotica but there will be an end - soon. I don't expect anyone to like ALL of my...