All Comments on 'Gargouille Ch. 05'

how come your 1st chapter and 5th chapter has the same story i.e., gargouille and gargouille 5 !!!!!!!!!!!! anyway nice story; keep on writing.

GET ON YOUR EDTIORS ASS FOR POSTING THIS CHAPTER AGAIN SOOOOOOOOOOO NOT COOL I THOUGHT THAT I WAS GETTING CHAPTER SIX

this is a great story, but please do not wait so long to post again!!

Sorry for the mix up. I re-submitted chapter 5 , as the original posted chapter didn't have a number(5), unfortunately I had forgotten to put EDITED, so the moderator posted it and didn't delete the old post...Crikey!

I've contacted Laurel, so hopefully it will be corrected soon. So sorry, hopefully i can get chp 6 out quickly, as compensation..(smile)

They want everything on their terms and are not willing to give her anything in return. Compromising is a foreign concept to them.

I waited so long for Chapter 5 but it was well worth it. Hope chapter 6 doesn't take as long. I love this story. Its an amazing step outside what I normally read and is a great breath of fresh air. Keep up the great writing. :)

lucky me for just founding this chappy yesterday. Wow....you amaze me with it. Glad to bookmarked your story though the unknown time for waiting do make me a freaky one in checking almost every time and somehow suddenly i pass it lol.

Btw why they do not tell her before the mating? I feel that your story will be into a long chappy , is that why you reveal each secret not on every chappy? Cant wait for the next

Love the story. Hoping for the next chapter soon. You are a great writer.

ms

love the storyline so far. waiting for ch 6.

BUT U NEED TO FINISH CAUSE I'M GETTING VERY MAD CAUSE EVERYTIME I COME TO THIS STORY U HAVEN'T POSTED THE NEXT CHAPTER N THAT IS SO NOT KOOL SO I GIVE YOU UNTILL THE END OF THIS MONTH THAN IMMA WRITE THE DAMM STORY FOR U...............

Hiya

I have heard from my editor and she's making good progress with editing. As soon as she sent the story back to me, then I will post it off to LitE. Thanks for reading my story.

Cheers

I am so a new fan of this story. Read it all in one sitting today! but pleeeeeeeeeeeeeas, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease don't wait 6 mos. to update. Great writting and I am sooo looking forward to the installment in this series!

Just checking to know if chp 6 is on it's way soon. Please update soon.

You recently said that your editor was almost finished with chapter 6. Will you be posting it soon?

Ever so sorry for the delay. Heard back from my editor a few days ago...hopefully chp 6 will be posted soon. Thank you for being so patient.

Cheers

Dear Lord i pray for an update soon. Please answer my prayers

I hope chapter 6 will be up soon.

I love this story so much!!!! Awaiting chap 6!!!!!!

Hiya!

Chapter 06 as been submitted to Lit, so look out for it. I hope you all enjoy it.

Cheers

Merry

Five.

I would love to see her do something to drive home her need for respect. Maybe actually seeing her hurt one of them. the dominance and submission is great, but it shouls (enentually anyway) be willing. Toys are no fun if they are broken.

I agree with Anondarius. It's frustrating me that they claim to love her but have no respect for her.

The threesome was quite sexy, although not easy to picture. Were they on the side or what? Apart from that, it looks like that girl spend her time fucking, eating breakfast and then slepping. Like she doesn't do anything else!! What did she do that whole week? Reading in the library? And their discussion is getting boring, going nowhere, with the two men keeping repeating that they will never let her go and then she just pout and cries and ...what? It is getting frustrating.

I enjoyed this chapter much better than the last, the language was way more fitting with the situation. I could really feel her frustration with them. See, I'm an equally stubborn person, so I'm just seething for her. Great writing.

But a word of caution, (now if you are Ms. Foxx; then please forgive my next comments) you are following too close the series, I would at least credit the original idea. Your story is almost mirror like to the other books where certain rules and back history were applied. I have read the first 3 books of the Gargoyle series by Ms. Foxx).

just the thought of losing everything all in one fell swoop. it's horrifying! these two claim to care for her , but they're missing the most important point: SHE DOESN'T KNOW THEM! and they don't know her. the most they've done is get some minimal background and a little gossip from the help. they would do better to spend time courting her. it's just so sad an unnecessary.

at the beginning of the story, they both expressed the factthat they are not willing to remain in the dark ages like the rest of their kind, but it seems as if that is not the case.

I did twang to leVe you a 3 but as I was scrolling down on my iphone I hit. So just know that I wanted to give you a 5.

I wonder if that's what really happened to the Gargoyles.. This is an intriguing read! Aside from the fact that threesomes never turned me on before this chapter lol.