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TheLongGamerTheLongGamerover 2 years ago

I think there was some confusion with the names of the Admiral, or if there were 2 Admirals, with which one was Lisa's ex.

That and I had to reread a few times to get where the possessed Archmagistrate ended and the woken Brenna began.

Other than that, a great read

WitchesCYOAWitchesCYOAover 2 years agoAuthor

Sorry for the confusion and thank you for reading!

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Hello all, Thank you for reading my stories. Some are second person as I wrote them for and about my wife and encompass magic, time travel and sleeping with lots of friends. Others are simply stories that we've written to pass the time or explore an idea. I hope you enjoy them...