by erotigayman
Very hot! Very effective descriptions of the sexual positioning painting a visual picture in cum!
I am always looking for new ways of describing sex, and you seem to be a pro at it. I like the slow, steady build up of the story story. (Going to have to follow you so I don't miss out on anything.} I like the point of view a lot. Most of the guys I write about are straight identified bisexuals (I dated a bunch when I was younger, so I know them), but I like the "I am still straight" thoughts your narrator maintains, as he continues to make exceptions to his own rules. I love character building, and you're doing great. Keep up the good work.
Use the F word get a 1. Every time. Not ok. Same with the straight guy giving nothing. Great writer. With some bad habits and bad ideas.