All Comments on 'Gemini Ch. 03'

Woohoo!

More story!

Enjoying the pregression of the sisters into incestuous, lust-driven lovers.And the Intrigue of what happened at the University is neat.

Keep it coming!

This is, without a doubt, THE best hard-fetish story of its kind I've ever read on the site. It doesn't hand-wave the absurdity, it doesn't dumb down the characters, and in fact the lust-madness is written so raw and so -real- that I almost want to cry: too often characters under compulsion like this are portrayed less as people than machines, whereas the sisters retain enough lucidity that the reader can still empathize even in their nadir: Lisa's metaphorical flight over the ocean is -startlingly- poetic. You said in the previous chapter, wanton smut shouldn't be any less aspirational than 'regular' lit, and you're damn well out to prove it.

I honestly don't know what impresses me the most:

Protagonists as street-smart as they are sexy;

Alison's discursive dexterity in the initial questioning;

A mad science plot that confronts the ethics head-on;

Writing that makes a hot sex minute last an hour;

The fact you've crafted an entire novel around -literal- quantum fuckery.

TL;DR: Worth the wait (and/or weight). :D

Cant wait when they meet Gemma now..

I am loving this story, and the wait was completely worth it.

Damn this shit is intense as fuck

And so fucking well written, I'm not often into the story so much when I'm reading smut, I applaud you

Wow!!!! Such good writing and story development!!! One of the most professionally written works I've found online... Truly hope you continue your work and that I get the pleasure and honor of reading it.

One of my favorite series on this site