All Comments on 'Gemma's Growning Pains Ch. 02'

This is getting hotter and hotter---I cant wait for more--I'm reallly full with attention now--'L'

Please hurry with more!

wow...

Great story ! Loved the carrot fucking. Can't wait to read about her riding a cock to orgasm (hers, not his). Also first time oral (giving and receiving) and maybe first time anal.

Very well written and I you really capture some first time excitement!

The whole Emma/Gemma series is very good, has some down bits (rape scenes were a turn-off) but overall excellent.

Your writing has developed well. Perhaps a bit too much detail at the start & bit too little at the end, but don't take that as a criticism as overall it's spot-on. You really have the knack of using more in the buildup but easing off when the going gets hot.

There is an occasional slip in grammar (grinded?) but much less than most.

Loads more please. You are a good writer and your stories are red-hot sexy.

Many thanks, kimdino

Really good keep it up

but no more rape stuff that was a major turnoff