All Comments on 'General Chemistry Ch. 01'

This is good, Alex: keep writing!

Talk about leaving a story, and reader, hanging!!! So far this is a definite “non event”

Can't wait to see more!

This is good, Alex: keep writing!

Excellent story, especially for a first submission!

Dialogue is good, descriptions are excellent, and it's fun to have the characters and relationships slowly revealed. Looking forward to more.

Really liked this, hope there's a part two soon!

Great stuff! Well done!

Ive never commented before on any story but this is too good not to tell you!!

Are you fucking kidding me? So freaking hot!

I’ve been reading stories on here for 15 years and this is seriously one of the best I’ve read - I love how genuinely respectful the tone is, how actually well-written and modern it is too!

What a well written story. I loved your characters and dialogue. It all felt very natural. Well done.

The introductory section was a bit nebulous as I was trying to comprehend the setting and characters. But, once they reached the house, I thought the descriptions of actions and thoughts were very realistic and fun. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Bruh. So hot. So well written.