Generative Change

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He leaned back in his chair and smiled, business was brisk and he had a stack of work to do, but he took a few minutes to relish the more hands-on approach he'd had with Alison and committed to himself he'd get involved in another subject soon.

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TheHandsThatLeadTheHandsThatLead5 months agoAuthor

@33RPMVinylPants, sorry you didn't like the ending, or the story, but we all have our preferences, perhaps the next one will be more your style.

@anon The ending was the ending, it just finsihed there 🤷

@elendai No sequel planned at this point, but there certainly is room for one if I get time/an idea for one.

elendaielendai5 months ago

Started wondering what it'd be like if it was just a ploy to get her and I was not disappointed. If you do have a sequel planned, I look forward to it

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Glad you are back, keep em coming. Would have liked if the ending was longer

33RPMVinylPants33RPMVinylPants5 months ago

All premise, no payoff.

Felt more like a worldbuilding exercise than a story with plot and characters.

Also, total downer ending.

ConstructiveConstructive5 months ago

The return of the king

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