All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 28'

Just because the author didn't write about your mermaid fetish doesn't mean he lacks imagination. This entire story is pure imagination. To create a universe the way he has and manage to keep it internally consistent shows a great deal of imagination. Perhaps you should try writing a story yourself if you think you are so much better?

YOU CHEEKY ASS PIECE OF SHIT.

LEFT US ALL ON THE BEST PART EH? WELL GET YOUR ASS OVER HERE AND FINISH THE STORY OR ELSE YOULL HAVE 180023 MAD PEOPLE WHO WANT THIS TO CONTINUE.

God damn it why do people abandon their stories on the best bits? GOD FUCKING DAMMIT.

Fucking bullshit leaving us hanging just when we got to the main story

Cliffhanger. WHY?!

WHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Why did this not continue this is a great story with a lot of build up and loose ends but he has not touched it in seven years?!?!? WWWWWHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!

Why the fuck don't u write more, this is the best story on this website and yet you just stop. Why?????????

This story ruined it for me :( It raised my expectations so high that now I don't enjoy any other story. I read this nearly three months ago and I haven't enjoyed any story I read since then. Someone please suggest me some good stories that are well written and rich in content as this one. Plzzz

to the anon below:

I feel your pain, but don't give up hope. I came across this site way back around 09, and I'm still here; there are *lots* of great stories to read. ... Sure, there are way more crappy ones, but there's still plenty of great stories to be had. Some are even completed already!

And since you asked so nicely, I'll direct you to some of the best.

{1} Over to your right, you should see a list of Similar Stories. At least one of them should be "Aphrodisia" by Lien_Geller. That is pretty great, as is pretty much everything he's written, but his "The Missing Dragon" is absolutely among the best on the site. His writing has slowed down substantially, but he is still at it.

* VERY similar to "Genie Chronicles."

{2} There's also Noble_Truth. Both of his series are amazing. "Celestial Matters" (/"Celestial Wars") is the fantasy, but we're currently waiting on "The King's Creed Ch. 2" (sequel to "Johnathan Creed"), which is also a great series. That chapter should be out shortly.

{3} There's also sycksycko's "A-Cup Angst." It currently has 15 chapters, some of which are quite long, so there's plenty to love.

** {4} ** If you don't mind reading another story that's pretty much in the same boat as "Genie Chronicles," you can read Intrepid_Fate's "Path of the Necromancer." In fact, I highly recommend it. It sucks that he stopped writing in the middle of the story, but it is still my favorite one here.

-- Put it this way: Would you rather have read "Genie Chronicles" in all its incomplete glory and be left aching for more, or have saved yourself that aching heart... but missed out on reading these **wonderful** 28 chapters?

If you're glad that you read it, then go read "Path of the Necromancer." DO IT NOW. Then go read those others I mentioned above; they can ease all the heartache because you know they're still ongoing. ("A-Cup Angst" is very reminiscent of this, but each author has his own take on the secret world of magic that's hidden from all us muggles - or mundanes, as they're called here.)

{5} Most definitely one of the best stories -- in the same league as "Genie Chronicles" -- is juliancoreto's "Alan." It's 28 chapters of greatness.

*Very similar to "Genie Chronicles." *

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{6} Yet another amazing story is DBs_Bro's "The Succubae Seduction." It went on for a whopping 34 chapters before he brought it to a close. Now, he's slowly bringing out a sequel for us.

{7} blacknight99 has a few really good stories, but "The Addicted Natural" is the best of them, *and it's actually complete already.*

{8} Another story that I check periodically for updates is Boratus's "Confidence." The problem is, he seems to have a bit of a history of going silent for years, then suddenly popping up with a brand new story that he steadily writes for a few chapters, before he goes silent again.

The only story of his that I've read so far is "Confidence," but his other, earlier stories may be interesting, too.

{9} One of the 1st I read was Zazbek's "High School Hypnotism." He hasn't written anything since 05, but I guess it can be considered complete, even if I still want more.

{10} Another that I read early on was ChrystalWynd's "Crime: Night at the Museum" and its sequel "Crime: Bimbomania!" (which I actually read before the museum story that sets it up. oops.) He also has a couple other stories that I read and liked, but not nearly so much as Bimbomania.

I read in some comment that he'd actually died, which would explain why he hasn't written anything since 2010, but that may just be a rumor.

{11} Superjoe99999 has a great story called "Heroes of Herodor." The last entry was in 2012 after a 3.5-year hiatus. So maybe there's still hope for more....

- His "Rise of a Dark Lord" is also worth reading, though it is a bit, well, darker, than what I generally go for.

{12} McBacon's "Caleb Woke Up" is probably among the least impressive on this list, along with "High School Hypnotism." Even so, it's certainly worth checking out, even if it seems abandoned.

{13} StoryTeller07 has tons of stories, but the one I like best is "The Breast Machine," followed by "Teacher Undressed." He was extremely prolific, but it's been a year since he submitted anything new, so I suspect there's some health problem keeping him away....

{14} PrimroseWriter's "Primrose High" is one of the more recent and interesting stories. He was writing 1 chapter each month... but now it's been 8 months since he submitted anything.

There.

You now have over a dozen authors to read, many of which have stories that are long like this one. A few of them even have multiple series!

#s 1-5 are by absolutely among the best on literotica.

Now go forth young grasshopper, and read greatness to your horny heart's content!

... For a month or three, anyway ;)

Why aren't you writting anymore???if you any problem which is not allowing you write then atleast tell us your ,many willing help you with...

Respected Joe Brolly,

Genie Chronicles is the best erotic story I have read so far. But as many of your fans have mentioned earlier, leaving the story incomplete is not something that is expected of you, unless you are a sadist. But a person who can dream up such an understanding Jack, an unimaginably irresistible Jennifer and their undying love cannot possibly be such a sadist.

If not for your fans, atleast for yourself, do complete the story. You owe it to Jack and Jennifer.

Sincerely,

A very frustrated fan.

Really wish there were more, but I enjoyed the ride. :(

To the commenters below, y'all realize the author may be dead... right? Or he might just be George R. R. Martin...

This is by far my favorite story! I've read it from beginning to end about 5 times. But if you are looking for a similar good story Genie Chronicles: Gemini is really good too!

Come on man write it off.

Hay man your story is brilliantly written and I'm thinking there are more fans of yours who would by now be willing to commission more of this story even if it's only to close off the ending but Still a great read

Another really great story that won't get finished.

Really sad. Such a good and interesting story to go to waste like it has. with the last update in 07 i doubt that any more will come of it. That should be a crime for a writer not to finish a story. I know my readers would not buy any of my novels if i did something like that.

From what I've read, Mr. Brolly has passed away. He's written an amazing story that remains unfinished. I've read it multiple times, always laughing out loud at several points, only to reach the end with sadness at his and his story's demise. Where ever you are Joe, thank you for the laughs. A hui hou.

Only just found this story, very sad the auther is no longer with us. Perhaps somone would continue with this excelnt story in tribute to his skills and memory.

I can only agree that it's sad to have such talent taken from the world and it would great to have someone able to continue this story as tribute the author.

Just took a few minutes to read comments. You have achieved legendary status among your fans. I have my reasons for believing you yet live, maybe you retired the Brolly name. Thank you for finally letting Jack buttfuck Jen. Thank you.

Third time reading this, please somone with more skill than I have will you carry on with the this story.

I just discovered that my favorite storyteller of all time on Literotica has died. What an amazing job he did with all of the various characters and situations in this particular case. I sure hope that someone has the nerve and ability to continue with this story. R. I.P. Joe Brolly. We will miss your storytelling.

How did you find out for certain that Mr. Brolly is no longer among us? I'm not doubting you, given the time elapsed, just curious. It's a shame we won't see where he was going with the story. Do you know if he left any notes on direction? I can see his mom having psychic/telepathic abilities, and a strong likelihood that his wild older sister would blow right past the taboo to get it on with her now hunky brother and his hot girlfriend.

I originally read this story in 2010 and absolutely loved it. Now (in 2016), I came back to this story hoping that it's been completed. Sadly, it hasn't been.

I loved the way this story is written. Loved the details, the language, the description and especially the sex scenes/scenarios. Wish I could read more of this. Does anyone have any suggestions or links to worthy fan fiction? If so, please let me know.

-SKI

The Genie just pulled your retirement. You better pay her off by getting busy and write a few more episodes!

Please?

:)

JOE I m a big fan of your stories please write more stories.pls.pls.pls.pls.pls.

Overall one of the best erotic stories I've read. This felt like it was going in some awsome directions and I was sooo excited to continue into the nonexistent chapters. If it's true that he's passed then I'm truly saddened and wish him the best post life existence he might have.

DJ

I want to respond to Master_of_Life's comment for any new readers that might read this comment chain.

1. Aphrodisia is very similar in tone to Genie Chronicles and is quite enjoyable. Lien_Geller is a great writer.

2. Celestial matters is not the same as Genie Chronicles. It's mind control rape, at least at the start. I don't care for this type of story, so I only read the first part.

3. A-cup Angst is completely mind control rape at the beginning. Basically a revenge story. I also didn't read too many chapters of this.

4. Path of the Necromancer is an excellent story; one of my favorites on this site. The main character is much more of an anti-hero compared to Jack's good guy character, but it's still well worth the read even though it'll never be completed.

5. Alan is nothing like Genie Chronicles at all. The main character uses mind control to rape and torture people. He even tortures a guy that the main character describes as an ok guy that has never done anything to me. In the first chapter Alan says to himself that he won't use his mind control powers on people because it's wrong. In the second chapter he uses his power to rape a girl that he doesn't like. If you like this theme, then you might enjoy Alan, but if you don't this will be a huge disappointment.

That's as far as I got with these. I have a few ideas of similar stories myself that I'll try to post later.

I wonder what happened and why the store was never finished? Makese sad that it was never finished. 😢😢😢😢

Please tell me there is more of this or even more to come! Hands down one of the best genie stories I have read and you leave us on a serious cliffhanger please add on if you can :)

please for the love of everything wonderful please continue this series!!! I'm begging you!!!

The story is great, but please continue it as the cliffhanger is painful.

Since this last chapter was posted on 8/24/2007, it's a safe bet that there won't be any more chapters - which is a real shame! I found the story line great and a very easy read.

Loved this series, really wish it kept going. Wonder what happen?

Heard that author passed.

Nooo omg thats it???? Omg ive truly enjoyed these. Im heartbroke. There are no more!!

Still waiting for more, perhaps some other author would continue this story.

In this nice cute good genie story. . . she shall live happy there after. The end.

Why does the most fire stories always end up getting dropped. I cry every time.

I rarely read stories of this genre but when I started, I couldn't stop! Please, please, please do not let it end here. That final cliffhanger is just begging for more! Plus, Jack & Jennifer/Genie have yet to make thier fortune & get married! Please continue this series. Thank you & more power!

It was posted here on lit that author passed away.

That the writer actually died is 'bout the only reasonable explanation for this story not being finished.

Sad t'hear it, tho. Many better, more articulate folks've detailed how great this story is, so I'll not go on 'bout that...

Damn shame!

Well written, sexy, and lighthearted. One of my favorites on site.

Another dead story.

I hope you come back someday.

This story has had its ups and downs. Too much detail on the tech, for one thing - DNS-101 after the rainstorm was so un-called-for.

But Genie/Jennifer and Jack are both sweet, and I'm sad that there won't apparently be more about them.

The author didn't seem interested in repeat encounters with any of Jack's other conquests. That's too bad. I'd have liked to see him get together again with Lacey again, and full encounters with Sharron and/or Betsy.

That brings up a point. There's a way that Jack is seriously failing to take advantage of what Genie has to offer. He could get with a married (or otherly attached) woman, and Genie could ensure that her husband/partner never learned a thing. Jack's too nice a guy to do too much of that, but surely an author as crafty as Joe Brolly could have found a way to make it fly once or twice :-)

It would also have been great to see Jack develop a deeper relationship with someone else, with Jennifer's (not just Genie's) enthusiastic approval. Nothing that would rival what he has with her, but deeper than the one-night (or one-afternoon or whatever) stands he's been having.

A dropped thread: the discussion early on of Jack wishing for his own memories to be temporarily hidden. There was a good long setup for that, but nothing ever came of it. Too bad.

Will he get with Cindy, in the untold rest of the story? I think so. I hope so. They both want it, if she can get past the taboo. How about Sam the kite-store girl? We never saw her tote board, but she seemed to me to have possibilities.

Jack and Jennifer never got a chance to double-team someone. That was obviously meant to be, with her being bi and all. Though I suppose it could get a bit awkward, with the other woman noticing that his cock is a different size with her than with Jen :-)

But most important (if not sexiest) of all: does his mother know she has magical abilities, or does she have them but not know it?

Great series love it! Wish there was more!

The personal interplay and lightheartedness was refreshing and added immensely to the story.

One thing I was hoping for but was a little disappointed was for Jack to “secret wish” Jennifer to be extremely shy and bashful at times. She comes out of the dressing room all ready to rock her bikini lingerie or a dress and suddenly finds out that she now a tongue tied prude frantically hiding behind her hands. Miss “sexual rockstar” would mysteriously find at certain times her face is a red hot as she is. Even her fantasies or talking to him would set it off. Now just imagine them at the beach, she runs in for a swim throws her bikini back out to him on the shore and as she emerges suddenly finds she all modest and embarrassed?!

Very enjoyable to read. It was good to read a sex story were they genuinely seemed to care for each other and their feelings! Be nice if it was longer…….

What about the obvious Genie could make 2 of herself or more! Aren’t 3ways what guys dream about?!

OMG! You left us hanging!

Oh no!!! Joe Brolly's Biography was last updated on June 22, 2007!!!

It doesn't look like we'll get any updates!

Great series, but it looks like it stops here. Too bad as I could see a lot more chapters that could be filled. Very Disappointed that it seems to be done!

One of my favorites all time. I think this was my fourth re-read. So sad there was never a continuation or conclusion

Finish the story

Story needs way more anal!

That's it? Not a very good way to end it. I was really enjoying this.

I just want to say thank you. It's a shame that it's over, but you have provided one of the best novels I have ever read. Your writing style is fantastic along with the overarching continuity and call backs. Everything about this is so clever. Again, thank you. And I can assure you that if you choose to continue this 15 years later, there is a very excited audience waiting for you!

Another author of a genie story mentioned that Joe Brolly set the bar for this genre. After reading this series I wholeheartedly agree. Hopefully some day Joe will return to Literotica and grace us with more of his wonderful writing.

OMG! What a place to end such a great series! I voted 5 stars for every chapter.

I hope you come back someday and finish the series; though considering the last post was 15 years ago (08/24/2007), it's probably not very likely.

Thanks

Someone really needs to pick this story back up. I could easily see a hundred more chapters coming from this.

A great story and a shame that the author hasn't posted anything more. I am sure that there is a good reason though.

MORE PLZ GOOD STORY

I agree!!! I really HOPE that this story continues one way or another!!!!

Really sucks this story eas cut short and never finished. Even though it has been a very long time I do hope sometime soon the author has a change of heart and finishes this story. Has a lot of potential to be a 300+ chapter story.

Alas, poor Jennifer, I'll miss you.