All Comments on 'Genie Master Pt. 02'

by DavKrieg

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TheSecretBunnyTheSecretBunnyalmost 2 years ago
Alright a comment

If you continue as you have, I think I this will be a nice story.

What especially find appealing is that they have their own will, and isn't just dedicated to the protagonist. Like the latest girl, she will not call him master. And i hope that Blaze will let his harem have jobs if they want to or keep the jobs they have, and not just be around the house waiting for him..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A Barbara Eden look-alike wouldn’t be all bad. He doesn’t have a blonde, yet. 😵‍💫🤦🏼‍♂️

Great story. Just the right mix of narrative and sex. I’m looking forward to your next installment.

5*

Tc

MklizanMklizanalmost 2 years ago

This story have been pretty nice so far.

I'm excited for upcomming parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looking forward to more parts of this story. Doing very well in the writing. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Loved it. Please write faster.

JRD66JRD66almost 2 years ago

Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nicely done, the sex is good, not over the top.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dude, new story soon!! Please! More women like Emma and spanking for Kat

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please keep adding you are doing amazing I love these stories

readerrd55readerrd55almost 2 years ago

I like the style of your writing and this is a fresh idea. Keep going as I’m loving this story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Incredible story

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

Fun stuff. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[15.08.22]

ANY story with a Doctor Who ref is AUTOMATICALLY Awesome!

11/10 Pairs of Sonic Sunglasses!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

More, please more!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This would make a great cartoon series. The storey is so descriptive. Keep going. This is the basis for the first part of a good movie.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Thanks much for sharing your imagination!

MarkT63MarkT63about 1 year ago

This story is one of my favorite Genie stories. PLEASE continue soonest!!!

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicm12 months ago

Are you going to continue with this story? I hope so it is pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Hopefully she ends up calling him Master too, if just from peer pressure from the others.

tinfoilhattinfoilhat5 months ago

It's not good this series hasn't continued. The last date was Jun 2022.

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Genie Master 2 is finished and submitted. I am very happy with the way it turned out. Genie 3 is in the works. Thanks for waiting and I hope I keep entertaining y'all. Have a great one and take care. I love many of the stories here. I dabble at writing. I hope you check my...

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