All Comments on 'Geoff and Marie Share the Love'

Looking forward to more adventures with these people. Maybe Ben helping out in other ways? Keep up the good work!

I am conflicted; I had thought of rating it a 4 for the looonnnnggg (long!) interplay of dialogue utilized in arranging what is in essence a simple harem (the wives or concubines of a polygamous man--in this case Marie's consenting friends and possibly Jane, one of Geoff's) and a "haremlik" (the part of the house reserved for women--in this case the haremlik would be Geoff and Marie's entire house, where all would meet for consensual sex)...all the while establishing that Marie is not manipulating/setting up Geoff for her later forays into sundry extramarital activities with other men. Geoff is to be the only male/cock-of-the-walk allowed to fuck the "chosen" women, facing that daunting task all on his own. Poor guy.

But then I decided that the long set-up was essential to firmly establish the psychological states of all the players in order that the (anticipated) activities in later chapters would have a believable basis for existence. True character delineation requires attention to detail in various contexts, and that is what has been given. I am therefore expecting that the "coming attractions" of all the parties will involve considerably more nuance and extensive involvement in the lives of each participant--and not just the physical "wham bam thank you m'am" simple acts of fucking.

So, a definite rating of 5 out of 5 on this tale so far, given with the hope succeeding chapters will be just as good...or even better. Thanks for this--not only for the intricacy of the plot development but in particular for making the players so clearly representative of people our age. Kudos and more please!

Your stories are always funny, sexy, sweet and interesting. I will never tire of Geoff and Marie. They are going on quite an adventure and I am glad to read about their sexual exploits. 5 stars.

Really hopeful you write more on this.

Dude for a humour and satire piece this raises some intriguing moral and philosophical questions though good humour often does that and satire should though often not so much well written and though I don't see the odds of any kind of realism the underlying questions are.