All Comments on 'George & The Adorable Sisters Ch. 01'

Wow! Give me more of that

-5*

I liked the story overall and especially the premise. What threw me off and kept it to 4 stars was the childlike words (personal preference dislike) and the action while good was a bit confusing, just kind of all over the place and abrupt.

Still great and I would like to see another chapter.

The sex is great and, since I like nerd girls, the sissers are cute, but their language (suckie sucks, etc.) is disgussing.

Agreed, it was a good story and probably the fact it was well-written was the only reason I finished it. The" cutesy" word choices were very very off-putting. It was a bit of a disconnect thinking of nerd girl talking like this. A tasty grilled cheese sandwich with pieces of uncooked pasta inside.

LOL, well the Tribe has spoken. For part 2 & 3 I'll dial that stuff down. I should have realized it wasn't going to work because it was so much trouble making sure I was using the right "terms" everytime. Thanks everyone!

I liked it. Well done. I'm not really into the child like language but you did a good job of internal eye rolling for the protagonist. I've had a girl-friend like that who loved baby talking before sex. I was never into it myself but I didn't care, it turned her on! If what turned her on got me more sex, then hell yeah I wasn't gonna rock that boat.

Looking forward to chapter two

Love, love, love this story. The simple pleasures of sex and adoration takes me back to another time. Thanks for the smile.

Excellently done!!!

Cute fun story! Thank you.

Its horrible. Just reading the horrid grammar and spelling like dude put it into Word and spell check. But English is clearly not your 1st language

Freaking loved this shit!!!!!!

A little childish in the attitudes, but I can totally picture girls like this, and it is adorable. Hot scenes, too. Nicely done!

Love the nerdy freaky sisters