All Comments on 'Get Undressed, Mom. And Come To Me.'

What the hell was this story about?

It sucked big time. I'm sorry.

you have brought on a full exposure of erotic art of writing. its literature if i say so. brilliant writing.

Shit story really bad writing

This guy has read too much Edgar Allen Poe and Shakespeare. Way to verbose and dramatic , after all, this is Literotica.

"The first part has come to an end, stay tuned for the second part soon....."

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

If English is not your 1st language then get a native English speaker for your editing

Didn't like it to much story and no sex!!!! This is an incest site and where was the incest?? If you continue put a little love and passion in and lots of incest?? Gave it a 2