All Comments on 'Getting Back Together'

This is my second of your submissions. To be frank, I think I lost you in the volume of the "erotic couplings" submissions until today. I don't know if the arc of this story is a romance, but I think if it is, you would find a greater, and more discerning audience. I'm not a writer - I'm a visual artist - so I'm a little hesitant to critique a discipline for which I'm not well trained, so forgive me if my opinion is naive. But, I think if your story was repackaged as a single (very sexy) Romance or Novella it would soar.

On a visceral level as I said above, very sexy! I plod onward to "The Cruise". Thanks again for sharing.