All Comments on 'Getting Handsy on the Third Date'

Not a bad story. Sounds like it should be listed under first time or erotic couplings. The characters need to be more interesting if you are wanting to capture the reader. I realize this is a short story, but it has possibilities if you want to give their relationship a try. If it is romance story you want, then get them involved in going places and doing things that bring them closer. Let their feelings and emotions show. If you want a erotic couplings story, keep it casual and hot. All this is just my opinion (my 2 cents). Always remember to write for your enjoyment and thanks for your time and imagination.