by thebigbadbrad
Seriously. Just that one word would make this story a million times better. AND.
This is what I look for in porn stories; the fantastic, the impossible. Good ideas.
Why didn't he just demand the wishing coin from her if his experience lasted until that moment? Then he would have kept her and made his own wish.
Didn’t make a lot of sense which is a shame. It could have been a fantastic story.