All Comments on 'Getting Inside of Heather'

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Sassybutterfly99Sassybutterfly99almost 3 years ago

Didn’t make a lot of sense which is a shame. It could have been a fantastic story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Why didn't he just demand the wishing coin from her if his experience lasted until that moment? Then he would have kept her and made his own wish.

denniscleedenniscleeover 12 years ago
Imagination

This is what I look for in porn stories; the fantastic, the impossible. Good ideas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AND.

Seriously. Just that one word would make this story a million times better. AND.

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